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Neeps513
2009-07-29 . chapter 2
LOVE IT!

are you going to do a sequel?
You should, how SS got what he wanted...

Totally should! =)
qt4good
2008-02-24 . chapter 2
Wow great work!! :D
fairyp80
2008-01-13 . chapter 2
This was a rather dark and angsty fic. I am glad that you didn't give Hermione and Snape a fairy tale happy ending. This was a great short piece!!
pstibbons
2008-01-12 . chapter 2
An interesting fic. A few more chapters of explanation - if you'd thought of them - would have been nice.
Lady Imara
2008-01-12 . chapter 2
Nice story. Are you going to write a sequel? You really should!
Logan
2007-05-27 . chapter 2
I love it, you should continue it.
soccerchia
2007-02-02 . chapter 2
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! WHY DID YOU END IT SO SUDDENLY!
It would have been so romantic to have them end up together.
But then again to end with this cliff hanger was great to!
Stephanie Baez
2007-01-18 . chapter 2
Speechless. Wow...this fanfic has beaten every other one i've read before. Perfect i absolutely loved it!! It wasn't disgussting and utterly plotless. It explained all clearly. It started right after the 6th book, which i love. I just loved how it just sort of bridged into the 6th book. And it was so interesting. It had suspense, and the way Snape and her met again. I mean i wasn't expecting her. How he was treating her, how she was treating him, his social statues, his behavio, his composure, oh and that wonderful ending! I love it! OMG. It was very realisitc believe it or not. I can somehow see that happening. And the end how he watches over her and all. I was defitnetely expecting Bill in the picture, and i was hoping Severus would end up with Hermione. But not all is a fairy tale ending. I love it! oohh...wait didn't i said that already...oh who cares...i love it! You can even continue, that might ruin it though depending how you do it. No don't this ending keeps me wanting for more, but its perfect. I am going to read it to my Harry Potter club, which i rarely do...but WOW I LOVE IT!!
LettyBIRD
2007-01-15 . chapter 2
ooh that was good stuff, mysterious and seductive - loved it.
AnaNinaSnape
2007-01-15 . chapter 2
Wow. Que era incrível. Como sempre. Parabéns.
Sou sua fã. E não ligue para os detalhes do lote. Acontecem e você deixou claro que não queria uma história extensa. Valeu a pena ser lido.
Congratulations.

Nina
amsev
2007-01-14 . chapter 2
What a powerful story! I look forward to reading your other writings.
notwritten
2007-01-14 . chapter 2
Excellent!
different
Charmed8620
2007-01-13 . chapter 1
Amazing story, I can't wait to see the second chapter.
Tessie
2006-11-30 . chapter 1
I am practically biting my nails to read the next chapter. I'm really impressed by this first chapter. Update soon, please! This is great!
elinor
2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Is it going to be Bill or Snape? You have me hooked there!
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