By the goddesses! Finally, someone has poked fun at the "seemingly perfect" characters of every fanfiction! Including Naruto fanfiction, where the female ninjas are just absolutely beautiful ad clean and smell like some kind of flower or fruit! I mean, seriously? Thank you for writing this so-called "one shot", poor Itachi and Sasuke! Uchiha incest is definitley popular nowadays.

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ok lemme just say i LOVED it tho right now i'm still having a huge giggling fit you should do more of these

Hm, you really hit the nail on the head with this one...
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I really can't say where I was trying to go with that comment, but I'm pretty sure that if I'd finished it, it would've been something completely profound and earth-shattering.
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(le sigh)*moving on
this fanfic was a "ROFL-COPTER"! >;D
...I actually have no idea what "ROFL-COPTER" literally means, so just take it as a compliment to the halarious style of writing used for this story.
the end!~

OH! FAV'D STORY.
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That's genius xD my favourite bit is the end.

...Really Ino,” Itachi sighed, “Even I’ve done Sakura, and you could hardly have failed to notice my foolish, little brother humping the kitsune brat at every possible opportunity.”...

OMG this had me crying laughing.

I could not stop laughing as I read this! Brilliant, brilliant parody fic!

Heh heh, oh my goodness, this was a delightful read! Quite an interesting point-of-view, full of witticisms and satire. Seriously, *how* did we never talk about our shared love of fanfic before? You've got quite a knack for humor and I could have used a good laugh back when I was in your fandoms xD

Perhaps my favorite part was where you delineated the signs of the author's painful-obvious virginity. Because, seriously, that happens way too much. All in all, fantastically written and very entertaining!

Oh good God!! This was ** brilliant! :D It cracked me up dear. I love the whole thing about him meditating because he didn't want to suffer from permanent OOC'ness. gah! I love it. You totally captured pretty much all of the cliches in fanfic but yah know we still gotta love our lemons! :)

-cheers

This is so true. hahaha

OMG! I adore this! I love the humor.

I love this! ^.~ Its really funny. I can't faveourite it at the moment as the faveoritng thing isn't working on my account right now =[

ohmygoodness that was hilarious. It was fulfilling and ridiculous. I loved it. By the way, you have great grammar!

This is an instant favorite/classic. Thanks a bunch!

lol that was a very funny smut and joke.

My friend told me about this story, and I REALLY have to agree that this was amazing!!
I think I was laughing the whole time I was reading it. Everything you said was so, so true about these fanfics where the main story line is basically two characters finding themselves in love suddenly and are just overcome with their passion for one another and just can't seem to stop their emotions... hahaha.
Anyway, thank you for writing this, I loved it.

It's really funny and cool. I admire your guts for writing something so psychotic.