 Shivas Prince 2006-12-03 . chapter 1hm real intresting. especially all the 'what happened after stuff' if you wanted to make it longer i could see potential; maybe your own spin on shin adn touma? i'd like to know what you thought they ended up i really liked what you said about everyone else it made sense, not shin and touma don't i think i'd just like to see your take rather than 'borrowed' ish. i could be wrong ^^;; it's. you did a good job capturing jun's perspective, yay. and... er... yay. ^^ chaio |