Absolutely love it!^_^

Hope to read something like this more.

This is EXCELLENT. Nice work!

Lovely, beautifully written fic.

Excellent descriptions and depth. This was a wonderful look at what could have happened behind the scenes.

I especially liked the last line about the Queen. :)

I hope to see more Roy and Riza from you in the future.

I have to say...I don't know how much I like Roy in this one. I want to see more compassion, I want to see more tenderness. But that's what I want to see, and it isn't necessarily in character. I have no reach the chapter where she asks him to burn her back, so I don't have the information necessary (I wrote my own version of the happenings, but not based on what was actually written). At the same time..it's what I _want_ to see; I can see what he would do though. He would push her away, he would try to create that sort of distance, for his own sanity.

You know what I mean? I want him to be more compassionate and kinder and concerned and careful, and in ways I can see Roy doing that. At the same time, I can see him doing exactly what he did here, creating a sort of distance so he didn't have to harbor feelings about what was happening.

That's a characteristic of a great writer--being able to present ideas of a concept that other writer's didn't imagine before. This was great. Please keep writing!!