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Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
God, it had been so long from the last update that I had forgotten the whole fic... xD Thx for the UD, i hope you'll UD ASAP... thx...

The song lyrics has absolutely nothing to do with your fic... It's just a way to tell you that I was here and that I loved your story...
... just song lyrics, don't mind me...

Mama please stop cryin'
I can't stand the sound
Your pain is painful
and it's tearin' me down

I hear glasses breaking
As I sit up in my bed
I told god you didn't mean
Those nasty things you said
You fight about money
about me and my brother
And this I come home to
This is my shelter

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
You'll see, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it has done my family

Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave

Daddy please stop yellin'
I can't stand the sound
Make mama stop cryin'
'Cause I need you around
My mama she loves you
No matter what she says it's true
I know that she hurts you
But remember I love you too!

I ran away today, ran from the noise
Ran away (ran away)
Don't wanna go back to that place
But don't have no choice, no way

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
But I've seen, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it did my family

Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
and act like it Comes naturally
I don't wanna have to split the holidays
I don't want two addresses
I don't want a stepbrother anyways
And I don't want my mom to have to change her last name

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
act like goes naturally

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend, act like it
Comes naturally
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be better)
(mom ill do anything)
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be betta)
(dady please dont leave)

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that

Daddy don't leave... daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
turn around please
remember that the night you left you
took my shining star?
daddy dont...daddy dont leave
daddy dont leave
dont leave us here alone

Mom l'll be nicer
I'll be so much better
I'll tell my brother
I won't spill the milk at dinner
I'll be so much better
I'll do everything right
I'll be your little girl forever
I'll go to sleep at night
Generally Maz
2007-10-05 . chapter 19
Haha, this chapter is fantastic. Naruto is always best on top of Sasu-bitch XD
Azamiko
2007-09-30 . chapter 20
I like the style.
Seito
2007-09-30 . chapter 20
*cheers* Poor Sasuke, so whipped by Naruto *snickers* *loved the last drabble*

I'm afraid I didn't get this drabble. o.o I REALLY need to go back and finish Naruto. x.XI stopped a little before chapter 300... so shouldn't take me that long right?
Myew-chan
2007-09-30 . chapter 20
That was nice...sadly enough, it's one of the only parts of the timeline I actually don't know, but it's still really nice. Short, but nice. I use that word too much. >_>
Azamiko
2007-09-29 . chapter 19
We! XD I LOVE this one! So so cute! And even better: sneaky!!
colgate.advanced.fresh
2007-09-29 . chapter 19
aahh this one was my fav XD

:P x x
Myew-chan
2007-09-29 . chapter 19
You mentioned me? I feel so honored! ^^ Also, this story is hilarious. But I'm sure you know that already.
susan22
2007-09-29 . chapter 19
this story was so great! Loved it!
theGreyPebble
2007-09-28 . chapter 19
AWESOME
ahahahha SASUKE IS WHIPPED!
i like this chapter... you should write MORE about how they got together etc
like as another chapter.
I LIKED A LOT
Seito
2007-09-28 . chapter 18
*rolls in laughter*
hahahahahahaha xD

Don't give up Sakura!
Keep meddling!!
Azamiko
2007-09-28 . chapter 18
I really like this one! I love it when Sakura meddles, and even better when she's baffled! XD
davidorr
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
ok
Myew-chan
2007-09-28 . chapter 18
That was awesome. It's probably the first time I've ever seen a story about how their relationship doesn't make sense, and I think it's awesome. Such a silly fight, too...XD
SylvanDreamer
2007-07-11 . chapter 17
Nice! Really nice! Ha ha ha! It was so much fun!
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