 sharnii 8/19/08 . chapter 1Nice work, good descriptions. :) |
 GenzaiOS 7/15/04 . chapter 1 Very good fic, thank you so much! I feel like I'm finally getting some closure. |
 Shsway 12/10/03 . chapter 1You've painted Anthy wonderfully with your words, though I must say your use of the italics confused me at times. I wasn't sure if you were using them purely to talk about the past for for emphasis on words and passages. You started off writing in the second person POV with the italics, but then switched to first person off an on talking about things that had happened, rather than things that were happening.
I'm not trying to make your efforts seem like they were in vain, though. You got your message across, and offered an interesting couple of choices at the end for the reader. Is Akio dead in Anthy's heart, or has she physically killed him? With the death of Dios, has he been dead for longer than any of us think?
Nice job. I especially liked Anthy's mention of the slaps and bad kisses she's been on the receiving side on, as well as the sentence about Chu Chu unchanging declaration of "chu". |
 spheeris1 10/10/02 . chapter 1 That was wonderful, such a good flow of words and thoughts. |
 Amy the Evitable 9/14/01 . chapter 1Wow. As nicely ambiguous as the actual end of the series. Bravo for trying to get into Anthy's head - never an easy task. Thanks for sharing! |
 ryquest 8/30/01 . chapter 1 Great story! Very expressive portrayal of Anthy. |
 Amai-chan 6/24/01 . chapter 1That was beautiful. I believe that you have capture Anthy's feelings perfectly. _ |
 Trowa girl 6/23/01 . chapter 1 OH GOD... that was... WHOOOOAAAA... *_* Great play of words. Admirable. He had not, would not have any prince to save him. |
 Kimberly 6/22/01 . chapter 1 Awesome. |