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| Bears Eat Beets 2008-05-22 ch 5, | abusei really enjoyed this...crisp writing, true to the characters and five strong stories. great work! |
| FictionInReality 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI love this story. Fantastically written. :) |
| Wendy Blue 2007-02-06 ch 5, | abuseThis was so...I don't even have words. This was fantastic and exactly how it should happen. Great work! |
| Alex Wert 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseAnything with Ryan (grudgingly) admitting to loving Kelly is always funny. Thanks for adding another good one to the heap. |
| someone5 2007-01-10 ch 4, | abuseYou're fucking brilliant. :) |
| tapemouth 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI swear this story is great. You should still right two weddings. Bob Vance (of vance refrigeration) and Phyllis Jim and Pam |
| Aracalien 2006-12-01 ch 3, | abuse"Fact, I am officially off the market" -halarious. |
| Padfoot Reincarnated 2006-11-29 ch 3, | abuseI liked it, and I don't even like Dwangela. The quotes at the beginning and end were nice, and I think you had Angela down perfectly. |
| Padfoot Reincarnated 2006-11-29 ch 2, | abuseAww. Sweet. |
| Padfoot Reincarnated 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I liked it. I think you really captured the sort of awkward, giving in feeling that Ryan has around Kelly. |
| bredalot 2006-11-28 ch 3, | abuseI really like all of them. I like how Ryan's resignation is maybe, a little bit, love, and the same with Carol. I also like the "talking head" bits at the beginning and end of Dwight and Angela's. But I would like to see Jim and Pam, even though you have them already married, just to see how you imagine it. |
| loli 2006-11-28 ch 3, anon. | abuselove it! you should write a chapter for pam & jim, even though they're already married =] |
| Dorkfish04 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. I love how you made everything from Ryan's point of view. I can really picture him like that. I really liked this chapter :) -Sarah |