very nice story ^.^ I really enjoyed reading it. Your writing is full of vivid description and good dialogue. Well done!!

-Bells

Aww! CUTE! That was one of the best Fruits Basket stories I`ve ever read!

hey hey, i'm still reading! i'm sure tons of people love this... because IT'S JUST SOO ADORABLE!!

among other things, of course.

due to the time, though, i won't go into detail. i think my brain would short-circuit. :) ever had that feeling? lol...

"He laughed airily, remembering why he loved her so much."

No.

Hatori?!

AIRILY?

Aww, this is so cute! Hatori and Mayuko for teh win!

This was really fun to read. =) Mayu and Hatori were very adorable. I love the part where Ayame and Shigure say they had to come and Hatori shouts "NO YOU DIDN'T." XD

I loved Yuki's little part in it, too! (Yuki's my favourite character, could you tell?)

Hatori's really quite the gentleman (he even stopped her when she was drunkenly kissing him)-- I picture him like that, too. =) And the ** block comment! XD Really good job. =) I enjoyed reading this.
-danielie

I love the slight newlywed vibe you've got going between them here..so awesome to see the same scene from two perspectives!

PS: Re: Chapter 14, Suddenly, I just had a random thought- what if Mayu'd had hickeys? Or seen any on Hatori? Those are a bit tough to explain away...would've loved to think of the look on her face then :)

love it!

I. Freaking. Love. This. Story. [insert fangirl scream]

I totally love this. It's so perfect how they like each other, but they don't like each other. It's incredible the depth and characterization you acheive with the different view points.

This is a piece of digital masterpiece. The different elements of the story balance together and it's simply divine. I love how much 'sexual tension' (lol) is mixed with the story and yet it does not overwhelm or become overwhelmed by the cute romantic story line. It's just TOO good~!

I love everything about it. How Hatori acts to stop it from going too far, showing that he really does love her. I love how he got over it and the pictures are so wonderful. Shigure and Ayame are down to a T. Those idiots. I didn't expect to see Kureno and Uotani here. That was certainly a nice change in characters. Lol. The ** blocking comment was so funny. The last part of where they meet Kana again, the husbands are just chillin' and adorin' their loves while the girls just chat away. That is completely realistic.

I just love how you portrayed Hatori. He loves her. Like he really loves her and he's holding back because he loves her. It's just so OMG.

You did a magnificent job. The plot was well formed and communicated, the characters were true to the original descriptions, and it was a truly wonderful read. I look forward to your other works. I'm glad that I chose to read some Fruits Basket today instead of my usual Saiyuki.

I can't find enough high level words to describe how cool this story was. Oh, did you know that in Wales, they say that's lush instead of that's cool? Where there you go, this was LUSH!~

Keep a writin'~!

*Squel!*
That was perfect and awsome in every way!
I love it when my favorie couples are put into situations like that! Cause like every second makes me so happy!
I also loved how you did both points of view!
All in all this was a great story!

OMGOSH! How cute(: I think they're a lovely couple pair.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Good job! :D

Holy cow, woo it has been way too long since I am here, and you finished this fic ages ago, but despite that you deserve a review to express my admiration to thse fic, beautiful and fun as it should be, hope you had not lose interest in furuba so u keep writting fics.

seriously, this was a really good Hatori/Mayu fic. I hope that I can look forward to more from you!

VM

Sorry, forgetful SkyLilies again- I was rush-reading and forgot to note it was Uotani who got them out of there, not Hatori- sorry for missing that little detail!
And I'm glad Mayu found out about the picture (perfect application of the smoking gun rule there, and probably Kureno- though I don't even like him and Arisa as a couple that much- was the best person to tell, since neither of the other two Mabudachi would, and I guess Yuki wouldn't either- I would really have liked to see Yuki and Machi in place of Kureno and Uo- I mean, Yuki knows about the picture and Machi would quirk-ify nearly any scene she's in, it'd have been so much fun to watch), but I think you know best) , though I am not happy that she doesn't remember their first kiss (even if it was rather alcohol-fuelled).
Either way, it was a fab story all around, one of my favourites of all time on - hats off to you!

the END? not fair! wah. well, nice ending. really nice (see how clever i am?).

~jax