I highly enjoyed your story; it was inventive without going overboard with the

melodrama. Though I have to disagree with you about the perceptions of Lina

in the eyes of her friends. Like the final part of Neon Genesis, Lina in the Sea

Of Chaos has to explore the very definition of her identity and the perception

of herself in the eyes of her friends. As my pysch prof said I am not what you think I am.

I am not what I think I am. I am what I think you think I am. Lina is not only

her own self- image. She is not only the images the others have of her. She is

both and neither. Her friends cannot truly know her. Lina cannot truly know herself.

L-sama is the only one who can, simply for the fact L-sama *is* Lina, has she is in all

ascepts of Her creation.

I highly enjoyed your story; it was inventive without going overboard with the

melodrama. Though I have to disagree with you about the perceptions of Lina

in the eyes of her friends. Like the final part of Neon Genesis, Lina in the Sea

Of Chaos has to explore the very definition of her identity and the perception

of herself in the eyes of her friends. As my pysch prof said I am not what you think I am.

I am not what I think I am. I am what I think you think I am. Lina is not only

her own self- image. She is not only the images the others have of her. She is

both and neither. Her friends cannot truly know her. Lina cannot truly know herself.

L-sama is the only one who can, simply for the fact L-sama *is* Lina, has she is in all

ascepts of Her creation.

This is really sweet I liked this fic alot I THINK I AM GOING TO CRY! DAMN YOU! Waaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!now seriosly I love this fic

Well-structured, insightful for characterization, and with good, humorous touches. You also didn't overplay the emotional aspect: good deal.

::sniffles:: That is so sad...rather insightful, too.

I whole heartedly agree with all of the views portrayed by each of Lina's companions, but it hurts to admit that my favorite character is so harsh and unkind to most of her companions. Very good. Nice effort

I thought it had some interesting ideas on how other people view Lina I think some of these oppions were pretty much right for how some of the cast saw her.

Very good fic, I enjoyed it immensely!

Truly, words fail me! I haven't read anything like this. I absolutely loved it. I even liked the ending, because everything fit so perfectly. Your descriptions of each false Lina were actually very accurate concerning each of her friends, at least I thought so. I hope you write more stories, this one was beyond awesome!

OMG! That was the best Slayers fic I've ever read! This is soooooo going in my favorites.