I stumbled across this story on AFF, and I thought to check here to see if you posted this. Gratfully this story was here, and I got to read 11 chapters. Now where is the rest? I wanna know what happens next. This story has been sitting in idle for 2 years. YEARS I SAY!Hopefully you'll change your mind and finish this wonderful lil gem. I'm loving this story, and it's definitly going on my favorites. Please come back to us, and update soon.

well i guess the last1 for me was 11 but i was close on guessing 12. :) . Well this is awsome so far of course i've read all i can read 'cause there is no more chapters on here. well hope you finish if i see this fic again i will read whatever you have added. :) .See-ya

Hi its me again i reviewed on the second chap. its chap. 9 now and i think this fic is great. i skipped over the lemon part though, you do know what lemon means in a fic, right? oh well you probably do. :) . well i just reviewed to tell you how great this is comeing along i'll review on chap. 12 'cause thats the last chap. on this right now i dont know if its the end but oh well.

I love this fanfic so far even though I'm only on chapter 3. It's so intense.

Yay! T/P! I luv you so much! This better have G/M in it too. They're my favorite couple besides T/P. You have to continue this! keep up the great work_

Yours truly,

Pan Brief

Oh! I am so excited I found this fic...It is seriously my favorite...I would put it on my favorites but ff.net is being mean...I absolutely love this fic. It has the romance, the action, the irony, and of course the drama. It rocks!As for the whole Dream thing. F*** Vegeta and Make Trunks change it! You get reouccuring dreams to warn you so that you can change it. Not so you can think about how you're gonna die...Make him see a loophole that he can save everyone with or something...Please update soon...This story is driving me to the max...Once again bravo Bravo, bye bye Jacks

Your story is great, write more!

finish the story. PLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE!

This s a good chapter! keep writing!

FINISH IT FINISH IT!

Oooohhh... the whole foreshadowing thing gives a good touch to this realy great story. I hope things go well. :) GOOD JOB! And in the words of Christina Aguilera "More... More... MOOOOOOORE!" (Moulin Rouge)

...PLEASE dont say Trunks' dream is going to come true? please? ::sobs:: they cant die! even if they got wished back, they cant die! please? ::gets down on hands and knees and BEGS:: i rarely beg here soo please? maybe trunks and goten could fuse into Gotenks... Just b/c baka Veggie-chan doesnt want Trunks to change the dream, doesn't mean he cant!

Well my b/f, friends, swimming, summer in general and chatting online has kept me away from beloved fics this month... Anyway, I'm glad this had G&M. I like that couple! Hope ya update soon _

Just one word WONDERFUL!

Kia ora J Dee! man its GREAT a great contrast of, humor, seriousness (is that a word?) and lemmmoonnnn...great lemon! heheheeh you know how I like them *evil smirk* anyways wonderful you asked for my opinion and i say FANTASTIC! One of the best Trunks, Pan, Goten, and Marron A/U fics iv'e read, which though is buggar all is enoghh to pic an overall Bonza One.. kai pai! Tino pai!