 a person with taste 2009-01-24 . chapter 3 I really loved this story! Please write more! |
 pfnelly 2008-06-04 . chapter 3Hmm, too bad you're on hiatus, the story was actually very good. Oh wells, i put it on story alert just in case. |
 superkawaiifoxy 2008-03-13 . chapter 3wow, i really like this story. its really good. i hope you update soon. |
 SadStatue89 2008-02-24 . chapter 3Please update soon, this story is great! |
 solarecilpse 2008-01-27 . chapter 3Me Likie - updatey soonie... Please-y? |
 wolfiegirl93 2008-01-05 . chapter 3please update like now!! kyaahh!! i cant wait any longer!! awesome job!!
zuko hugged katara!! OMG so swet hahahah xDD
i love your fanfictions! but please try to update them hahah lol =P
anyways ill be waiting for the next chapter!
ja ne~!
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 Ra'iira The Fiend 2008-01-03 . chapter 3And it's time for another update. |
 Casa Circe 2007-11-27 . chapter 3I love this. This is one of the few zutara stories I've really enjoyed. It isn't sappy. It's genuinely humorous and well-written. I like how you added political dimensions and realism to the setting as well as your witty dialogue. I laughed out loud at Zuko's reaction to Katara's borrowing his clothes. I do hope you update soon. This is quality work. |
 CentariFighter 2007-11-23 . chapter 3INteresting interesting developements. Thanks so much for getting this puppy back up and running, I really did like where it was going and was kind of bummed to see it unfinished. I do love the kid angle, how there's three different fugitives. When he says, "can I" she looked up he looke down, "help you?" I wasn't sure who was saying what a little later. Maybe stick in a quick transitional sentence? (this is me desperately wanting you to update all of this stuff so I'm reviewing all of it) THANK YOU and keep up the good work! |
 crash and burnn 2007-11-23 . chapter 3i have only one thing to say and that is hahahahahhahhahaahhaahahaahaaha lol o my god i cant feel my ribs.
please send for new chapter |
 AvatarAiris 2007-11-22 . chapter 3plz continue
I really like your
fic!! |
 FireChildSlytherin5 2007-11-21 . chapter 3Sweet fic. :) |
 Dee Lee 2007-11-21 . chapter 3Cute! The romance is starting! Heh! |
 Dee Lee 2007-11-21 . chapter 2A nice start. But they seem a bit too peaceful with each other. |
 SALAMANDA 2007-11-19 . chapter 3 so far what ive read is really good
id like to read the rest of the story so i cant wait untill you update
keep up the good work |