omg CUTE that was realy cute =P

I think this is a lovely piece of fiction. Not too long, but long enough. Not over-worked, either. It's got an almost conceptual feel to it, I love it.

cute.

Very, very cute! :D

This is very cute! I'm going to go look and see if you have any others.

Great opening line by the way 'You'll die.' Draws people in. :]

That was just too cute ^^ I liked the whole concept of Gippal's "non-chalant" -coughcough- attitude, and that was a very lovely comparaison about Yuna and Tidus' relationship. I think that it really tied the whole meaning together. I kind of felt that the ending paragraph, minus say the 2 last sentences, was a little weaker than the rest of the story, I can't really explain why. But awesome ficlet, once again, and I can't wait for another. Rock on (:

xD. That is really sweet. Sweet as, cute and bubbly-- not the slang word that means 'cool' or something XDD!

oh, I just love your one-shots. Maybe you should gather them up all into one book full of Rikku and Gippal drabbles (:?

This was very random, but it was excellent like always! NO criticism here! Take care and God bless!

p.s. random is my middle name!lol!

It was so cute! but I dont think you should have made them date in the story I think it might've been better if they were still in that stubborn "im not going to tell them I like them" stage...I dont know I just like them better that way lol but you do have other fans..other than that it was good like always.

That's so cute! You should TOTALLY WRITE MORE! totally.

That was really cute :) Lovely idea. Oh how I love it when I receive an email alert of an update from you!