that was really well done and cute.
-Yuki

I LOVED THIS!

Nice!

-light claping- Very nice, it rymes well!

Very nice.I like how well it rhymed!

I loved it! idc if u hate yaoi write more!

When I first look at this, I thought 'Oh crap. Thats a poem... RUN!' but I read it anyway, because I'm always encouraged when people say its about Sasuke /before/ he goes gaga. Thanks to that better judgment I have found that I did enjoy this after all even though part of me still insists I shouldn't have.

My favorite part was the second last line... I should probably go retrieve a squee-squidgy.

Thanks for having the courage to put it out here.

-Josey.

this was really funny _

this made me smile so big my teeth hurt, great job!

that was really cute...lol

!i love it!

Ha ha ha ha! That was such a funny little rhyme! It was very clever and well-done. It's the sort of thing I might read in a Nursery Rhyme - a good one, mind you. Great work!

KAWAI

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE!

AWESOME! so cute :D