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| DMfan11 2008-07-14 ch 2, | abuseGood story hope you update soon. |
| Madhatter Sheep 2008-07-06 ch 2, | abuseYes, please make Sharkboy and Lavagirl get together, and then make Rosemary and Max together. For real. None of this SharkboyxOC stuff. SB and LG should have a cutesy little lovely little relationship. Period. Lawl, can't wait for the rest of the story though. |
| alleywayqueen 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abuseits reali good, just one thing do NOT rewin it comepletey by having sharkboy with that mermaid, it will mess it all up, bring lavagirl back and well i guess you could keep rosemary maybe fix her up with Max JUST NOT SHARKBOY!ok? sharkboy can be attracted to her but not love her ok? sorry if i have insaulted you but i just dont like it when another girl comes in the picture for sharkboy or another boy for lavagirl and n they cant be gay ok? they only stay together! lavagirlxsharkboy sharkboyxlavagirl got it? good! |
| daseyfan2008 2008-03-24 ch 2, | abusecontinue!! |
| Vampire's Heartache 2008-03-05 ch 2, | abusekeep going update soon really good |
| Princess Falling Star 2008-01-23 ch 2, | abuseYES! you finally updated, I was sure you had dropped the story. So far it's great. SB/LG forever! |
| Ducklin 2008-01-21 ch 2, | abuseIt's really really good and I like the plot. But what I really want to know is were Lavagirl is! |
| amylovestakuya 2008-01-21 ch 2, | abuseMe forgives you for not updateing!! I'm also wondering if you decieded to put sharkboy with Rosemary or Lavagirl...cause I kinda startead reading this hoping it was Lavagirl. but anyways this is getting good. Please do try to update it sooner this time! :) |
| Unicorn Fire 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. i'm intersted. I would say no LG should not be dead just missing. like one of thoses characters that comes out of nowhere at the end of the story, pressumed dead the whole movie(In this case Story) and comes to save the day in the end. IDk. |
| Ducklin 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI don't know when you did this but it's really good and you should totally continue!! |
| undiscovered nightingale 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseohh i like this ALOT!! umm hm idea well i really really want lavagirl to live =[ (PLEASE DONT LET HER DIE)=[ AND I WOULD LIKE IT THAT LG AND SHARK BOY WERE TOGETHOR BECAUSE YOU KNOW ITS ROMANTIC AND IN THE MOVIE THERES SOMETHING BETWEEN THEM. well those are my ideas i really hope you write more soon i would love to read more. |
| ravalicious 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abusePLEAse update my gosh wat are u doing u can't leave us hanging there |
| melissa 2007-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abusepuleaze update! |
| Elise 2007-11-16 ch 1, anon. | abusehey i really like this story so far...please continue! |
| g r i m x v a n i t y 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusesounds very interesting. I like it, :] |