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| Way Walker 2008-07-12 ch 14, | abuseThis is a pretty cool story and you have captured all the caharcters very well. I hope you update as this is not really an ending and feels unfinsihed. Anyway i enjoyed reading it. |
| Cari 2008-05-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseSo cute! I really like how you brought Lindsey into the story, people tend to look over her alot |
| Cari 2008-05-04 ch 12, anon. | abuseGood thing Lindsey was there ^_^ That was cute |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-19 ch 14, | abuseCoolness. |
| Radical Pretense Gothica 2008-01-12 ch 14, | abuseThat story was awesome. |
| DemonUntilDeath 2007-07-21 ch 14, | abuseThat was a great story! I liked the mixed in gore with the story, though you kept it at a very respectable level and your writing style was excellent! The ending was very sweet and makes for an amazing story. Great job! |
| aweena 2007-07-01 ch 14, | abusethat wasn't corny, i loved it. Off to read yet another :0D |
| mmelon3 2007-06-13 ch 14, | abusealright, so don't take this the wrong way cuz i think it was written very well and it was a good story! i just would have liked to see more about the recovery and how greg dealt with that and all! but overall it was good! so good job, and keep writing!! =) |
| WitchGirl 2007-05-19 ch 14, | abuseThank you VERY much for keeping me company on the long spouts of time I spend backstage not doing anything. I read this whole story on my iPod over the course of this week durring tech rehearsals and let me say, ne'er a dull moment. I just got back from a midnight show and I'm exhausted, but let me just say bravo. Though they are numerous, I do enjoy me a good Greg-kidnapping story every now and then. While the premise is far from original, it's still a fun thing to read (and write, lol). Also (and this is my review reply to you on Salam as I am too lazy to do it seperately) aha, yes, Greg physical torture is fun, but never underestimate the damage of psychological torture, the scars of which can last much longer than physical, and with which you can do so much more to a person. While you can see a scarred man heal physically, you never really know if the man who lost his mind ever really found it again. Thanks for reading, and again with this story, quite adorable. I think my favorite part was on the phone with Grissom, when he said "I know you will [find me]." It was just way cute. |
| The Silent Rumble 2007-05-01 ch 14, | abuseThat was phenomanal with a touch of emotions, love, hope, and sadness. Awesome work. |
| Kaiho Inutaime 2007-04-21 ch 14, | abusethat...was...AWSOME! I read it all in one shot and I just couldn't stop!! Your are an EXTREMLY talented writer! This is my first CSI fic ever reading,and this was one of my favorite fics EVER! ^^ :squee: Greg!! I love Greg, he is one of my favorite CSI and I love how you portrayed his exact emotions! I could actually see this being an episode! You did a great job! Congrats! ~Jess |
| Sand 2007-03-06 ch 14, anon. | abuseI just wanted to say how much I appreaciate you writing Greg as a strong person through this. I was talking with a fellow CSI fan lately and we both said we felt Greg was a lot stronger in dealing with stuff than Nick was. Nick is more of an emotional person and you pegged that so well with your story. I have read many that make Greg seem weak, but I have never seen him that way. Thanks for writing the characters as they seem on the show. |
| kokomocalifornia 2007-03-04 ch 12, | abusegreat stuff! |
| Tahalli 2007-03-01 ch 14, | abuseT: Sweetness to the M-A-X-X. What more can I say? |
| Not2BForgotten 2007-02-26 ch 14, | abuseThat ending was PERFECTLY fine! I liked it...though it would have been nice if Greg brought up the chocolate and coffee again...but that's just me. |