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GinnysLove
2008-05-15
ch 25,
abusenot, not. well, not... cool...
i loved it, but didn't like the ending, that's just, mean
mike
GinnysLove
2008-05-14
ch 18,
abuseso we meet george even more, hmm.
mike
GinnysLove
2008-05-14
ch 17,
abuseharry and ginny can't just have a picnic can they? lol.
mike
GinnysLove
2008-05-14
ch 15,
abusewow, this was a bit confusing, lol, anyways, another wonderful chapter.
thanks
mike
GinnysLove
2008-05-13
ch 4,
abusewhat a grate first lesson in da.
mike
GinnysLove
2008-05-13
ch 3,
abusehm, grate clif hanger to leave it at, intrusting story, i like so far.
mike
GinnysLove
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abusehey there;
grate chapter, i wonder what that devise is, and good luck to anyone who trys to keep harry, ron, and hermon in school
smile love it
check out my story if you would
thanks
mike
Lientjuhh
2008-04-12
ch 25,
abuseWell... Awsome story... I liked it very much... it was great story... Pansy who turned to good... Kirishima who is a demon... Mrs Malfoy and mrs Lestrange who turned also to good... Harry who met his parents and sirius even they are dead... I like this story... Well done... You made it very interesting... Well done... ;)
Rimshooter
2008-03-17
ch 25,
abusefirst half
funny as hell
last chapter

-Rimshooter
Rimshooter
2008-03-16
ch 13,
abuse*.*.*

umm, 1998, Evas were made about 2017

you contradicted urself...
boomer sooner
2008-03-03
ch 22,
abuseWhoa, Whoa, Whoa, wait a minute here. Look, I really like the story you have, it is pretty awesome. HOWEVER, looking at the condition of several characters, such as Sayoko's grey eyes, Arael's marraige to Sentaro, and Yoko Ikari present, this means that this story would have to had taken place no earlier than the 2500's maybe even longer. I don't really think this was the time period that Harry Potter was set in. Then again, this is a fan fiction so I guess you can play around with the aspects of a story a bit, just wanted to point that out.
ellery colenso
2008-01-30
ch 25,
abuseFor a story I stumbled across, I was hooked from beginning to end. Fantastic.


*Available for BETA*
twilight lover girl 101
2008-01-23
ch 25,
abusei loved this story i hope that you will wright a sequil
mrsspotter
2008-01-21
ch 25,
abusehi this is excellent. is there a sequel to it. please say yes. i loved it so much i just sat there and read it all in one sitting. if there is a sequel please say it has mana in it. i love her. i found she actually has a similar personality to me. minus a few certain aspects.duh. i would have to say my favourite part of the story, well two of them that i couldnt choose between were when the mana exploded the death eaters "bits". and when peeves got hold of mana's item that transfiggured people into random things. particularly loved harrys threat to ron about letting hagrid ride him in his broom state and lunas comment that follows. i was laughing so much i nearly fell off my chair. i had tears rolling down my cheeks and my brothers were standing there holding me on the chair giving me stange looks. i couldn't stop laughing and my stomach still hurts from it. that was last night.
random chibi
2008-01-21
ch 11,
abusekarishma rox! she's so funny! i'd love to have her for ateacher! or maybe not... anywho, i love your story!
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