I'm gonna pause a moment and say what an immersive story this is. This offers great insight into your characters; and I am mezmerized by the storyline from chapter to chapter. And I love how you bring an Every-Man's view into the culture of Iron Forge and Gnomeregan itself. I shall proceed to continue in my reading, and see how the training of warlock skills is now more than a 'beam of light', so to speak.

This is written well and looks to be an epic! Good luck in the OOS Poll!

Yeah, looks like Perfyume really is a little lacking in the 'friendship stuff' area.

I think I like this story better than the actual game:)

This is good. I'm glad you're taking your time with the plot. Game-stories are often too rushed.

Very epic-like. Well done.

Looks like a good story. I read slow, but this looks worth it! I love your descriptions. Not too much and not sketchy. Thanks!

love the junk mail...!

Hey, good character interaction, w/o being just dialogue or action. Good pacing, too.

This is a solidly written story, and I'm just getting into it. There are some grammar errors, but not a big deal. I like the way the characters stay true to form, and don't all sound alike, without being phonetically unreadable.

**My nomination for the otakuonlinestop fanfiction poll for October.

Thanks for sending me a PM, this story's prologue has so far shown your writing to be quite wonderful indeed. I gladly accept this into the community!

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awwe, how nice :D

but why cant she make a port...

u'dont think...

:O

Very nice story.

Hmm I can't think of anything that you can improve on...

You finally updated! Yay!

Fanfiction has been empty for weeks. My e-mail is dry. Finally something!

I think we all know who called Perfyume's name ;o

Haha very nice work keep it comming!