 Shardi 2009-10-21 . chapter 6I know the last time you updated was about 2 1/2 years ago, but I'm still going to review. This is the first time I reviewed since months ago. Never watched the show, but it's still awesome.
I really enjoyed the story, and it was great that I know all of the characters here. I even laughed at some parts because they were funny. There are a few minor spelling errors though, but that's it.
Only seven characters left? I don't know who should get out. Luigi is popular, but Bowser is funny. I would like Bowser to be in some more chapters, but I would not mind if he's eliminated.
By the way, my favorite character here is...
Makar.
That's it. |
 Linkstaroflightclan11 2009-08-11 . chapter 6Don't get rid of Makar PLEZ! He's the best LOZ character every... well, besides Link, 'course. I mean, I know he's usually pretty wimpy, but so what? He's awesome! ^_^ So keep him in, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Great story, BTW! |
 Fulcon 2009-03-11 . chapter 6Breaking Canon!
-In a serious fic, I would have some serious issues with characters acting OOC. Only a couple things are forgivable: Zelda and Links personalities are almost completely undefined (Link moreso), so it's impossible to get them OOC. And Mario and Luigi just made me laugh. Bonus!
-Fun fun! I love the challenge and Link's narrative...as well as Zelda's challenging of that narrative.
-Man in Black take's your rupees...so true, so true... |
 Fulcon 2009-03-11 . chapter 5Ah, YES...the tie vote.
-The Tie Vote is something I really should've seen coming, but since I didn't, it's quite apparent that there's something for it. It was unexpected, thus makes it good. I like it.
-The challenge section, while seeming quite interesting when Link explained, was severely muddled, and I couldn't exactly tell who was doing what...or whatever.
-For the positive note, however, I like Makar in this chapter.
And...now I'm onto the next chapter. |
 Fulcon 2009-03-10 . chapter 4Hey! I'm sorry it took so long to get this to you!
-I'm starting to get the hang of the description in this fic, so I'm getting a better idea of whats going on. Mario conspiring with Bowser? OOC for Bowser, since he LURVES Peach, but in a parody, I let that slide lots.
-I like the Dialogue of the WWP tribe. I'm not sure WHY, but it just pleases me.
-I love the drama surrounding the Classical Zelda tribe (or whatever the heck it's called). I laugh regularly.
You know, speaking of islands, Chuck Norris once visited the Virgin Islands. When he left, they were 'The Islands'. |
 Fulcon 2009-02-16 . chapter 3AW I LOVE THINGS LIKE THIS!
-Oh, the drama! The Suspense! The trechery! It's all good...and really funny. I laughed at Mario and Bowser's reaction.
-Spelling error! "Peach: “Well, no. Why would I be? I don’t want to go home yet. And I don’t want to sent any of you guys home. I was having such a horrible day yesterday. I hope I didn’t offend anybody.”" 'Sent', I think you mean 'send' in that part. :P
-You know, something just occured to me: If this is supposed to have the twelve nintendo all-stars, where's Samus? Where's Fox? Where's Captain Falcon? WHERE ARE THESE PEOPLE?!?
And that's it. All I've got...:P |
 Fulcon 2009-02-16 . chapter 2Let me tell you...
-Reading this is actually hurting. I don't know, maybe you should include some actual description instead of Link just telling everybody what's happening...that way Paragraphs wouldn't break up the story.
-But everyone is acting as well as I thought they would...humorously and fuming with fake drama. Yay!
Uh...that's pretty much all I've got. Sorry... |
 Fulcon 2009-02-16 . chapter 1Oh, yes!
-Ah, yes: The Parody. This is actually just a introduction chapter, and whilst the writing style would not pass in a normal fic, in a parody, it feels right at home.
-Your choice in dialoge actually had me laughing. And in a good way, the way you intended me to laugh, rather than the other way...good job!
Yeah, not much to say here...oh well! Onto the next chapter! |
 ZackMeyer 2008-11-18 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story (when will you add the next chapter?) If you have time, please look at my story called Super Smash Mania Island. I know the name is dorky, but it was all I could come up with. |
 Owneybaloney 2008-04-02 . chapter 1I like it and I would love to read more. |
 Typing Typhoon 2008-02-16 . chapter 6Hey T.j., Awesome story! When you get back to your story make sure Bowser wins. If you can't at least make his departure a violent and dramatic one. |
 Storm Midnight 2007-08-22 . chapter 6YAY! i love your story so far, i really hope you update soon!
(I think Bowser should go, but then again as long as Mario dosen't got voted off I'm good)
Question: if Ash brought Pikachu couldn't it count as an extra member of some kind? (I hope Ash wins because I don't like Brock and I am a die-hard Pokemon fan)(Yes, girls can be obsessed with pokemon, too)
And I have an idea for a pokemon based challenge (It's kinda stupid but I think it will work)! Team Rocket has stolen a valuble item fron each of the tribe members and the tribe whose members re-obaint their items the fastest wins immunity/reward! (Okay I know it's very, VERY stupid; you don't have to use it) |
 cakedoughnutschickenboob 2007-05-23 . chapter 6J'adore. I love real Surrvior on TV, but this is so much better. Real people are over rated.
-CDCB |
 Imagination's Dream 2007-04-28 . chapter 60~0 That was... interesting Lost... the cliffys get alittle... over-used though. But it is funny.
'Pimp-slap' common word for me. Cracks me up. Like the word cheese. XD
Up-date soon, I have a feeling your reader will come after you with tourches and pitch forks if you make them wait a long time again. ;)
~ID |
 DynturaDJ 2007-04-02 . chapter 6Great story so far! Link as the host is a neat idea! Can't wait to see what happens next! |