|Reviews for Space Cases: The Catalina Chronicles|
| Harry Yorrink 12/18/06 . chapter 2
You have a very good way with words. You are a little fuzzy with proper punctuation, but many famous authors don't even know an ampersand from asterik. My main complaint would be that you seem indecisive in what P.O.V you are striving to tell the story from. But other then that, a very good read. Glad I stumbled upon it.
| Arianna of the Sea 12/1/06 . chapter 1
Looks better, keep up the good work.