I LOVE IT! We really need more Jaylie fanfic writers...i love them as a couple and need more...lol well write more soon!

Phoenix

you should so keep goin with that! ITS AWESOME~

I love it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow... that was quite the heartfelt story. I loved reading it; it was so emotional. And the way you were able to show Ellie's and Jay's love for eachother was excellent.

Though, it was sad. Ellie getting cancer wasn't something I ever thought of. But, she had someone who loved her, and she's able to spend her last moments with Jay.

Great story, this is now a part of my favorite story lists. This story gets an "A"