great story, loved it!

This was really good.

Ugh, damn it; why'd she have to be Mrs. Turner? I don't like Will!

Okay, only the fact that this is so incredibly well witten allows me to forgive you for being so cruel to Norrington!
We'll have to agree to disagree about how he would have behaved with the strumpet. LOL

The name of the ship,HMS Penitence, is truly inspired.

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I really enjoyed this. I'm always up for a little illicit Elizbeth/Norrington, when I can find it!

Expertly written. I especially liked the very end.

Wow, a very good piece of work! I enjoyed reading it very much! Thank you!
Bye Astraeas Dreams

*gasp* That hussy!! First, she's engaged to Norrington, but she likes Will, then she breaks it off with Norrington and kisses Will, then they get engaged, then she starts to emotionally and psychically connect to Jack, then she starts to have these desires for him, then she makes out with him only to leave him to die and break his heart, and in the process, betrays Will, and now she married Will but is still friends with Jack and now she sexes up Norrington. That bitch. Great story.

Actually it is well written, I like the part when you contrast Norrington and the ship. I believe Elizabeth could do what she did although I am not sure about whether Norrington would do that, he could swing both ways (his characters in CotBP and DMC seem to be in opposite direction). Did you mean Norrington was ill-tempered? I thought he was a pretty calm and collected one, at least in CotBP.

I really, really like this story. But I'm wondering why they were approaching the Penitence with a white flag up in the first place. Beautifully written though. I like it alot.