I'd read several of your stories previously, but this is the first time I've read this one. I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it and I'm going to root around to see if there are other stories of yours that I haven't read yet.

Strangely enough I read this when you first wrote it and yet I just got the alert last night! WTF is up with this website?

Same thing happened to me, I thought I posted a chapter, couldn't see it, tried to post again, couldn't, so I put it on the myspace page. It's already been read and reviewed. WTF?

I do love this story, and I love the way you write strong women who keep their men in line. Soft and gentle yet strong.

Kudos again.

XOXO

Such a great ending to such a wonderful story. I absolutely loved it! Great job. )

Wow - it's hard to believe that a weird situation a few months ago turned into such a beautiful story. But that's exactly what this one is. Beautiful.

I love Randy and Ayanna - one of my favorite couples of yours. And I really think that this was a perfect ending for them. I'm a sucker for a good happy ending, and the wedding was the perfect setting for one! And Madison? What a cutie! You write the cutest little kids EVER.

I'm really sad to see this one end, but I know that you've got a million other great ideas in that brilliant head of yours, so I'll patiently await the next one on the edge of my seat. Great work!

Yea! Very good! I really enjoyed this. I just caught the play on words at the end. The Sun (could mean thier son...or the sun room...), the moon (making love by the natural moon light) and the stars (could be the sparkle from her ring), very poetic Ms. Vera.

Again, another wonderful story!

Kudos!

xoxoxo

Shanny

The last chapter was beautiful and I really enjoy reading it. I'm so happy that Dave and Kristal is finally happy. I also happy that Randy and Ayanna are happy. It as been a long and hard road for these two couples. So it's wonderful that they all found peace and love.

Well Vera, I have to say this story was simply brillant and I'm sad that the story ended. I just enjoy reading your work and I want to thank for sharing another great story with all of us. So thanks again.

xoxo

Janice

Awe, I really liked it. It was a great finish. I loved this whole story since you started it. Great job. :)

Perfect, perfect, perfect. no other way to describe this amazing number you've done. I loved it great ending.

Oh, I loved it! Thank you so much for such a great ending :)

Aww, so cute. I love love loved this story, just like your other ones. Do the world a favor and never ever stop writing.

xoxoLeila

Only you Vera. Only you. Only you could have a 7 year courtship AND a 2 year engagement. That's damn near 9 years or were the two intertwined? Even still 7 years is to damn long a time. Lol. Anyway, offa that. I love the way Yani and Randy hooked up. I want the stars, moon and sun too damn it...lol. good story Vera

FF is being dumb again about their e-mail alerts.

Anywho, fabulous job my dear. Just too sweetness! And who would've ever thought from the begining that Randy would become Dave's best man at his wedding? Not muah. But I totally love it!

Sad to see this story end, but you did it justice all the way through. Awesome job again!

And I'm gonna PM you in a minute about, not so much of an idea, but who'd I'd like to see in one of your upcoming stories ;D

Aw how sweet! I think I see a great future with these two...I know Randy is not perfect but Yani has a lot of patience I think..Great story!

I loved the smacking of the tattoo...brilliant!

Awh! They're such saps! I'm completely agreeing with Randy on the whole Dreamgirls thing. lololololol. I'm glad they're getting a happy ending.