Wow this was so sad and so happy at the end. I liked how Sakura realises that her boys need her and how Kakashi and Sakura comfort each other.

This is a very well-written story. The perspective is very creative. This story does reflect how Sakura is viewed to post people; extremely pathetic and weak. Sakura, as Kishimoto said, is supposed to be the most human-like and is probably the only one that has emotional growth. This perspective reminds me of something Sasuke would say to her maybe. because the italics emphasize, which I think Sasuke would do if writing.

Very nice. _

It's unbelievable that this story only has seven (soon to be eight) reviews.

Review people. _

'Sasuke's still training, Naruto's still searching, you're still crying.'

Wow. That was really pretty.

You're a good writer.

I'm surprised this only has six reviews. Oh well, I'll add one for you, okay?

I think the best thing about Sakura is that she's human. She's the most human character of Naruto. She isn't a savior, like Naruto, she isn't emotionless, like Sasuke, she's beautifully shattered and ripped, like shards. And everyday she tries to jumble them together and get on with her life. That's what I admire most about her. :D

This story really captured the essence of Sakura.

So good job! -

Aerith

This is beautiful writing. Just seems like a companion piece to selfishness to self-sacrifice in my stories.

We seem to both look at Sakura like this. n_n

Very nice. The imagery is positively fantastic!

Very nice.

Gorgeous. Beautiful. Breath-taking. I loved it.

I love it. It's so... I don't know. It's like a photograph (does that make sense? XD) and you're just looking through. A look-don't-touch sorta piece. And use of second person was AMAZING. You deserve more than just one review! Beautiful.

Beautiful introspective on sakura's situation.

For a first try it was extremly well thought out, hope to see more from you.