awesome!

Jigen is probably one of my all time favorite characters, and you do him incredible justice in this piece. I love your imagery of the devil, particularly the tar dripping into the water but with Lupin's face. Very effective and creepy. Thanks so much for writing this, it's been on my favorite list for ages but I never reviewed it.

I like the way you portrayed Jigen as having vague sensations, it really feels watery. The Devil in the form of Lupin was also a great idea which you pulled off very well.

Beautiful. Absolutely wonderful. I loved the whole stream-of-conciousness thing, not many people can pull it off well. Can't wait to read more from you!

-LL3

Hm...what's your dA name?

I'm Skellington13Rose.

Anyway, I really liked this. :D

:D i love this. :d it amused me greatly, i really enjoyed it, very much so :) wonderful writting.

And i love that picture leigh drew too :D