fab story! bittersweet and a tad ironic but absolutely awesome :D

It was short, but perfectly so. Sometimes a plot doesn't need to be super long, it just works, hehe!

So it is now one of my favorite stories, and thank you for gracing me with such a great story :)
-Madeline

What an intriguing beginning!

awe this was so sweet! E

That makes me so happy. It was a bit sad, but the storyline interested me too much to not keep reading. great job. I really enjoyed reading your story.

~Tori

This is love and I loved this very much. *sniffs* well done.

this was SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY! sort of bittersweet actually
but i loved the happy ending!
brilliant writing by the way..

That was so sad at the end but a better way to die then the way he did in jkr's version. I loved this story,it was so touching. Part of me wished that hermione regained her memory so she could be with tom again and he could be happy with her again,that way,everybody wins. The only thing I'd that critique on is in the beginning,you mentioned that he cried once of twice. Well if I recall correctly I believe tom never cried as a child or an infant. But oh well fanfiction is for enjoyment and it was very enjoyable indeed. I just wanna say kudos and bravo.

second time i read it and you still got me to cry at the end!

That was such a sweet story, though I wish it were a bit longer.

Interesting idea, but your story seemed just like a summery of events with one or two snapshots and therefore not very interesting. I suppose it would have been a great deal of time to actually go into any details, but this way felt rather superficial. I did like your idea and plot alot.

The idea for this story was really good, but I felt like it was rushed after the second chapter. Also, I don't think things could have been solved so easily. This seems too much like a "perfect" ending to me. However, overall the plot was interesting.

It sounds as though she knows he is dead. This was a great story.

This was a brilliant reworking of a great pairing in my opinion. Kudos!

i cant believe you had hermione date her grandson. yuck!
I did enjoy this story!
Brittany Jane.