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Tamira
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
Wow, I giggled quite often within this story! in many ways it has the feeling of the show and that I like. - and I think Megavolt's plan would have been pretty cool... At least he would have ruined the feast for more people and more totally than what happend this way... Not that I would want to tell this to Negaduck, he probably is allready in a foul mood anyway...

One little critic: Launchpad normally calls Darkwing "DW", even if Darkwing is Drake... I guess people normally just asume Drake has a middle name that starts with a "W"...
Irual
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
HI,

I thought I reviewed this when I first read it but evidently not and since you updated your other story it got me to looking over your other ones again. I appolagize for not reviewing sooner this is a great short little gem.

let me just say that I ADORE this little smilefest LOL

also I have to say that I think you are right and that the muddlefoots, or at least Binkie knows more than she lets on to Drake but isn't it nice that she let's him have his illusions HA!

also your discriptions and charachterisations are spot on and I could easily see this as an episode which made it even better. Don't get me wrong, I like your AU stuff very much but THIS ( and your other two holiday fics ) are a real cannon treat! thanks for posting this

your friend Irual
The Illustrious Crackpot
2007-09-30 . chapter 1
Nice! (I know, Drake, I'm ALSO surprised at the Muddlefoots getting something right!) Great work on the dialogue especially—everyone's perfectly in character, and Megavolt is downright hilarious. Although the ending seemed a bit...I dunno, but it kinda seemed to me like a bit of an awkward ending point, like the story kinda trailed off...don't take my word for it, though, I'm not always good with critiques.

Anyhow, great job!
LuckyDuck29
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
I love this! They're all so in character, and Drake's attitude towards the Muddlefoots is perfectly written!
avian
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
Hahaha! Truly halarious. Your description of the Muddlefoot's obnoxiousness is just right on the money. Your description of Binky's walk-I'd love to animate that.
Anna McNarin
2006-12-02 . chapter 1
Too cute! I love it!
Fire From Above
2006-12-01 . chapter 1
I love your oneshots. They could be episodes of the original.
Heide DeVries
2006-12-01 . chapter 1
That was a really good read. I laughed my butt off when Binky mistook Megavolt for a stockboy. Excellent Thanksgiving fic (I'm on Deviant too but so I got a glance at the contest guidelines, btw). It's very creative writing!

P.s. Sorry my thanksgiving story made you sad. v.v;
Oustiti
2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Nice story. Is their Gonna be a sequens or do you keep it to one page holiday fic's? (which is quite orridiginale)
Jou-pup
2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Haha, I got to admit this one was great. As good as the Halloween one. My favorite was the "Binky asking Megavolt for the turkey" part. Then again, the whole chaos at the grocery store was funny. You'd think nefarious villans would have nothing better to do during hollidays.

Great work, I love it.

PS: You did Halloween and Thanksgiving. So does that mean there'll be a Christmas and New year fic? I'll be looking out for it during the end of December~
LordNegaduck
2006-11-30 . chapter 1
That was a very cute and TOTALLY AWESOME Thanksgiving Fan Fiction! You really have a tremendous amount of talent for writing!! I really enjoyed the supermarket scene when Darkwing defeated the Fearsome Five, thanks to Binky’s homemade family recipe. All I wanna know is if that stuff is available over the counter? I certainly can use some about now!

Excellent Story, and a most definite winner for Darwking’s Domain! You got Lord Negaduck's Vote!!
BlackAerin
2006-11-29 . chapter 1
*snort* the world ending indeed! lol
argh, talk about bad luck! getting sick on thanksgiving? major yuck!
and Muddlefoot family recipes? *shudder* all the more reason for drake to go bury himself... lol, poor fellow, he's been through a rough year!
this brought out a more nicer side to the Muddlefoots... at least in binky's case... (actually besides her absentminded sweetness, she doesn't seem at all that bad...)
aw, poor bushy! at least he's being nice to spike... lol, I loved Megavolt's plan... I certainly wouldn't enjoy having a dead bird stuffed at my face for hours...
(is licky still giving you trouble? poor licky, he deserves much luv despite his confusing speech.)
ha, tis a little sad and funny about the 'real Darkwing' tho right at the very end, it sounded like binky knows more than she lets on... yes? no? lol
I enjoyed this fully, as is expected from one with talent such as yours...
keep it up!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2006-11-29 . chapter 1
This is one of the best DW's one-shots I've read! Excellent job with Drake, the Muddlefoots and the villains... and maybe, just maybe, Binki knows the truth, but she is just so kind she'll pretend not really knowing so Drake can feel better.

Keep the good writing.
Nightw2
2006-11-29 . chapter 1
Hey there, icequeenkitty. Not much I can say here except that you did an absolutely awesome job on this tail. Terrific job on the characterization, action AND humor. :-D Two thumbs WAY up! :-D
GOOD STORY
2006-11-29 . chapter 1
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT CHAPTER 2 UP BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO DRAKE AND IF GOSALYN ALSO GETS SICK AND I HOPE YOU CAN PUT CHAPTER 2 UP SOON
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