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TsumeHikaru
2009-10-17 . chapter 6
really good story!
history
2009-10-13 . chapter 6
I love a lot this story !
Lord Rebecca-Sama
2009-09-09 . chapter 6
i love this story! update soon please! ^_^
CleverBast
2009-08-22 . chapter 6
makes me wonder at what naruto and sasuke would do...
Wisper
2009-08-13 . chapter 6
Love it, update?
Lientjuhh
2009-08-12 . chapter 6
I like it.. Well done.. :)
ZxExN
2009-07-31 . chapter 6
I love this story. :D Great job explaining everything. Updates anytime soon?
Red Jeanie
2009-07-13 . chapter 4
This is not meant to be a flame.
In the story you write about Naruto putting enough suger in his tea to put someone into a hypoglaecemic fit and that is not write.

Hypo= under
Glaeme is a name
ic is put on the end to indicate the word is an adjective

The best terms to use for what you mean would be Hyperglycic or
Hyperglucic.

Hyper=over or high
glyc or gluc = sugar


Now I have read this story be for and missed this mistake and if I had not been taking Health Terminology this summer would have missed it, but having taken the class could let you know of the mistake. Thank you for writing a wonderful story and I hope you continue.
Kingdark
2009-07-10 . chapter 6
This is a nice chapter. I would like to see how the Harry & itachi relationship came to be, and I'm hoping it won't move too fast. I have nothing against yaoi stories as long they move on a calm and steady pace with no graphic descriptions.

Anyway, despite that's its been more than a year since you updated, I'm hoping you still having something ready to post.
hisokauzumaki
2009-07-08 . chapter 6
please update soon1
is it safe to assume that the 'family' escorting them will be the weasleys?
Little Phoenix93
2009-07-03 . chapter 6
I'm greatly looking forward to Dumbledore's fumbling attempts at manipulation! The flashback between Hideaki and Itachi was cute, too.
seventhSINwrath
2009-06-29 . chapter 6
I love it so far, am defeinatly looking forward to more.
Ryutana
2009-06-22 . chapter 6
Yay! I love pairings of Harry and Itachi! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
Absentminded Dreamer 1310
2009-06-22 . chapter 6
ello, i came across this looking ofr any minato/itachi fics... huh, ok, kinda not what i was expecting, but it is a good surprise
i like this, a lot, the potential is amazing and its intriguing and oh, i want to see the sheer havoc that sasuke and naruto can create... with the weasley's im guessing? fred and george and shinobi... i mean, come on, the mind reels
XD
so yea, just letting you know that i like it, but i doubt that anything is gonna happen *sigh*
so, er, yea... bye.
tati1
2009-06-13 . chapter 6
*laughs* Excellent start! Please continue!
--tati1
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