 TsumeHikaru 2009-10-17 . chapter 6really good story! |
 history 2009-10-13 . chapter 6I love a lot this story ! |
 Lord Rebecca-Sama 2009-09-09 . chapter 6i love this story! update soon please! ^_^ |
 CleverBast 2009-08-22 . chapter 6makes me wonder at what naruto and sasuke would do... |
 Wisper 2009-08-13 . chapter 6 Love it, update? |
 Lientjuhh 2009-08-12 . chapter 6I like it.. Well done.. :) |
 ZxExN 2009-07-31 . chapter 6I love this story. :D Great job explaining everything. Updates anytime soon? |
 Red Jeanie 2009-07-13 . chapter 4This is not meant to be a flame.
In the story you write about Naruto putting enough suger in his tea to put someone into a hypoglaecemic fit and that is not write.
Hypo= under
Glaeme is a name
ic is put on the end to indicate the word is an adjective
The best terms to use for what you mean would be Hyperglycic or
Hyperglucic.
Hyper=over or high
glyc or gluc = sugar
Now I have read this story be for and missed this mistake and if I had not been taking Health Terminology this summer would have missed it, but having taken the class could let you know of the mistake. Thank you for writing a wonderful story and I hope you continue. |
 Kingdark 2009-07-10 . chapter 6This is a nice chapter. I would like to see how the Harry & itachi relationship came to be, and I'm hoping it won't move too fast. I have nothing against yaoi stories as long they move on a calm and steady pace with no graphic descriptions.
Anyway, despite that's its been more than a year since you updated, I'm hoping you still having something ready to post. |
 hisokauzumaki 2009-07-08 . chapter 6please update soon1
is it safe to assume that the 'family' escorting them will be the weasleys? |
 Little Phoenix93 2009-07-03 . chapter 6I'm greatly looking forward to Dumbledore's fumbling attempts at manipulation! The flashback between Hideaki and Itachi was cute, too. |
 seventhSINwrath 2009-06-29 . chapter 6I love it so far, am defeinatly looking forward to more. |
 Ryutana 2009-06-22 . chapter 6Yay! I love pairings of Harry and Itachi! Keep up the good work, and please update soon! |
 Absentminded Dreamer 1310 2009-06-22 . chapter 6ello, i came across this looking ofr any minato/itachi fics... huh, ok, kinda not what i was expecting, but it is a good surprise
i like this, a lot, the potential is amazing and its intriguing and oh, i want to see the sheer havoc that sasuke and naruto can create... with the weasley's im guessing? fred and george and shinobi... i mean, come on, the mind reels
XD
so yea, just letting you know that i like it, but i doubt that anything is gonna happen *sigh*
so, er, yea... bye. |
 tati1 2009-06-13 . chapter 6*laughs* Excellent start! Please continue!
--tati1 |