Amazing! This is probably the best fanfiction i've read! I love how this could totally happen in the series as well! Good job! :D You have a new fan

Wow, I enjoyed both parts...and in part two the kids were insane! I can't believe they were singing lol. Unbelievable.

This story was quite illuminating!! I wonder if there will be an epilogue. This story needs something to tie up the very small loose end.

Knightewolfe

i have to say one word: AWESOME.

...even with some grammar mistakes.

YOU ROCK.

lolololol that does sound like them.

haha nice

This is just about the best short story I have read in a while. *holds sides while laughing* I will look for more from you.

great story!
love how naruto was told the truth through a play.
i like how in this story he realizes the truth yet we don't see his response.
especially like how he left the room yet was still waiting for hinata

this story was so cute and i like how it talked about naruto's childhood and took place in the orphanage.

very cute story and has a nice ending to it... but it left me wanting to read more

hahaha i laughed so many times
good job :)

wow, that was really good!

too bad we didn't get to see naruto having an epiphany and finally realizing what the children actually implied.

This is such a great story. Is there another chapter in a making? It's one of the best fanfics I ever read!

*sigh*...Absolutely adorable. And thoroughly believable. That's what I look for in a good story...

I love how you describe Naruto's more sensitive side, and the pain he would have gone through that we all tend to forget at times. The orphanage was a delight to read about, I thank thee :)

cute story

AW! KAWAII!! That was so sweet! I actually thought Naruto and Hinata were going to get together at the end, but I still loved it! The children were so cute!