Aw, this is really good and you haven't updated in so long...well i guess all i can say is that i'll be waiting for it!

this is a cool story. i want a update.UPDATE!

The moment where Leon realized his feelings was too perfect! You are such an amazing writer. I WISH I could write this well. And the alien cracks are hilarious!

I loved the Alien cracks and of course Zack!

YAYA! Told you I would be reviewing again! It's awesome! Leon and Cloud make a really cute and awesome pairing!!

Update soon!

Byebye!

It's really good! you really set the whole plot and erm, stuff. Either way, keep writing and come out with the next chapter soon! :]

okay, so after finishing this chapter, I feel like a big huge jerk to have commented so early on the armless tank-top thing. Based on some of your word choices, I get the impression english isn't your first langugage. (And if this is wrong, please shoot me.) In any case, this is a cute story so far. I like everyone's reaction to Cloud's cuteness, haha. I'll have to read the remaining chapters later, but I look forward to them. :)

I promise this won't be my only review, but I tend to forget the things I want to comment on by the time I get to the end of a fic... Anyway, correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't saying "armless tank top" a bit redundant? Afterall, a tank top is a tank top because it is sleeveless. So what do you mean by "armless"? Might as well say "armless top with no sleeves." ;)

GASP sqeon how could you lol and sqeon tutoring cloud? this could get intresting neat story ^^
hope ya update soon

I love this! more more more!

So cute! I wished to see more counterattacks from Cloud's group though. Cloud, Roxas, Sora, and others really need to show what they've got XD Yuffie and Riona were fun too, continue writing!

gutsy! update soon!? please...

Can't wait till some Cleon action xDD Chapter 3, please ? ^^

Please update oon i want to see what Cloud does to Leon for caling him girly (Everyone run for your ** lives insane CloudLeon fangirl! Run away!) Please update

great story, i love how you've done cloud's character, can't wait for more! ^_^