O.o WOW. You need to write more. Yeah, it was a bit depressing, but really cool, and poetic.

Ha. Nice twist. Funny how little things can be so distracting isn't it?

*sniff* sad yet sweet.

Interesting...

::sniffle::

That's really sad.

You mad me cry. Wah. I love it though.

Update soon, Rory!

Emmy

What people so often think is peace is merely desolation. And since that is what she truly sought, that is what she achieved.

Very ironic. In order to find peace in life she had to end her own.

OUCH! OMG! GASP! I...(speechless)... I can't believe it, oh my god. That was so shocking! Good story, especially the ending. (faints)

Dude! Totally depressing, great though. Good Job.

:: gasp ::

That last line.

It was...a shocker.

Very bleak, very gloomy, but a good visual-like.

It's believable writing, and deep. Keep it up, Ror, you're amazing.

Love, Queenie

have you ever read Tamora Pierce's "The immortals" quartet? Because there's a scene a lot like this. But this one is really good to.

Wow. How remarkably bleak.

You really should write more Rory.

-RR76