whoa... THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! keep updating...

I love this story line! Please keep writting! *puppy dog eyes*

Like the story, but Zuko and Iroh strike me as being rather OOC falling asleep on the job like that. Well, deffiantly Zuko anyway.

You must finish this... O.O

There's just enough of everything... and not too much smut... and I'm ruddy picky... PLEASE FINISH THIS O.O

HEY! I THOUGHT AKAI WAS WITH THEM, WHAT'S SHE DOING HELPING THE FIRE NATION GET INFO ABOUT THE ATTACK!? I'm so confused. >< Please update soon, I'm so attached to this now, and I want more!

Wow! Are you going to update this?! I noticed you haven't updated since March, please continue, I really like this, ALOT!

Hey, just thought I'd say befoer going on, I noticed a mistake in here that you should fix asap. Iroh is not known as the Dragon of the east, it's the West. Fire nation is on the Western side of the world, if he was from the earth kingdom, then you'd be correct. Just thought I'd point it out.

This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. Keep it up! x

I love this! Love love love you're writing! I can't wait for more. :)

wO> its evil. but didnt katara notice zuko? and he didnt chnag.e and and adn no poor toph

brilliant! i love your story. keep up the good work.

whoa.
this fanfic is BIG LOVE.

i have read all of the chapters and I WANT MORE!!

^^

i'll leave comments on the fanfic at DA too. ^^

Update soon!

Um...you should read some of Spleefmistress's M rated works, (sadly they aren't on this sight, but she has a link to them on her profile on this sigt) they should you get ideas. Also, try starting a chapter like these off with something completely random, like Zuko and Azula talking about mash potatoes or something, then slowly build to the love scene and go from there.

I personally don't write smut and post it, the smut I do write, is in my writing journals, though I have posted on smut peice and that's on DA, its titled My Queen. (Its crappy, don't read it). But I love reading it in the dead of night. Its really some good stuff, my favorite writer for smut is Spleefmistress.


Sincerely,

Dragon Jadefire

PS: Please read my fic Walk My Love.

Ha! This is great! I've never read a fic where any one of the characters gave the other The Finger. *claps*