 Lady of the Hunt 2008-08-28 . chapter 21Your Shigure is so awesome!! I wonder if there's anyone in the Furuba fandom who can resist that little taste of darkness in Shigure. heehee. XD |
 Lady of the Hunt 2008-08-28 . chapter 10lol. Like Shigure wouldn't know.. XD |
 Lady of the Hunt 2008-08-28 . chapter 8Oh that ending was awesome! I think Momo/Megumi would be incredibly intriguing. I hope you do more with them!! |
 Ieyre 2008-08-21 . chapter 2What made me think of Shigure and Kureno? Well, I guess I think that it came from this fic I read that was Akito making them have a threesome. It was pretty messed up...yeesh.
Seriously, I think it could be interesting. I feel like it would be in Shigure's character to do something that perverse. I could see it as revenge for him, sleeping with the man who is essentially Akito's sex slave. As for Kureno, yeah, I don't see it as much...but he does admire Shigure a lot from their childhood. So that's something.
It's a really weird idea, I KNOW. |
 Ieyre 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Okay, when I reviewed earlier and said "too personal", I was referring to SHIGURE, not you. I meant, maybe he wouldn't want to write about something that more personally affects him. Though, he's so preverse he might actually take a sick pleasure in it.
As for Akito, I honestly think that the anime's gender ambiguity totally compromises her character. Being a woman is such a huge part of her history and motivation in the manga that to change it for the anime is altering the story too much, in my opinion. Kureno, Ren and Akira don't fit into the story without her being a woman.
So, in conclusion...I think you should write Shigure and Akito! Of course, you did say canon pairings weren't your favorite. |
 Bitofbadwinter 2008-08-06 . chapter 21wow! thanks for updating! lol I really like this fic! Please keep going! |
 S. Whiner 2008-08-05 . chapter 21Some good writing here. I enjoyed the fact that you made Tohru not so flat[a few chapters back- the one about her innocence] and had a good chapter about Ritsu as well. Of course, it'd be fun to have a ShigurexAkito or ShigurexKureno chapter, if you have the time. I enjoyed the last chapter the most, as it made Shigure's perversion literal. |
 Ieyre 2008-08-02 . chapter 21These are really...interesting. I would like to see Shigure/Akito or Shigure/Kureno...but maybe that's too personal for our little author. |
 xxfirebubblesxx 2008-07-27 . chapter 21that was...really meant to be rated M. >/<
wow.
for the title...maybe one with the words "perverse" and "perverted/pervert." perhaps "to be a perverse pervert" or something...
very well written! still blushing! xD
ja ne!
mimi-chan |
 SnowCharms 2008-07-18 . chapter 21Lol...poor Hatsuharu...that wasn't really **...more like musings...but either way I'm so betting that Yuki and Kyo will beat him to the ground should they find out about this...what exactly did Hatsuharu do to the class president in the bathroom to show that his hair was natural? Update! |
 DragonDi 2008-07-18 . chapter 21I really enjoyed this chapter. You really delved deep into my favorite character, and you know what? I think you're probably right all of it. But, gosh, the first and last paragraphs are just so true about him. Thought the part about Haru was hilarious, and the bit about his fetish for leather was incredibly sexy (does that mean I have a thing for leather? Hmm. Anyhow...) The really funny thing is that a friend of mine used to joke, "I wish I was a dog so I could lick..." (well, you know...) So to actually see you address that made my day! Well done! |
 DragonDi 2008-07-14 . chapter 9I love the descriptions of the men in Tohru's life--especially Ayame and Hatori. Gosh, that bit about Hatori really blew me away: "He's coiled, pure intensity, a cool demeanor with a hidden fire..." Incredible wording--very well chosen! |
 SnowCharms 2008-07-07 . chapter 20As much as i like Haru...i do not like him wif Tohru...i rather him wif Rin...they're definitely d dark horse couple...update! |
 Bitofbadwinter 2008-07-05 . chapter 20haha! great chapter! heres a challenge for ya! Momiji and Hana! |
 Hoku ala 2008-07-04 . chapter 20So well done... Wonderful job! |