I love this! But it made me really sad too :(

awww poor dean. Great story, loved it :)

wow...that was intense...but really good!

great job :)

I loved it. All the childlike references to the soccer ball and the s'mores really made it interesting. I hope you expand on it, 'Cause i would so read it. :D

is there more

Me likey me likey me likey.

More please...:)

Oh gosh...that was so sad...I'm not really into wee!chesters, but I had to read this. I have no clue why :) But I'm glad I did it, 'cause it's just so creepy and sad and...well. You captured 4year-old Dean very good, that was really a little kid thinking there. A kid that had to grow up so damn fast and soon. The end ist very symbolic - don't know the right word in english, but ' But he didn't wake up' - it means to me that that was the point Dean's ... 'first life' ended and he grew up and become the dean we know. Not a long time after that I learned 'bout the monsters I suppose and yeah. Hope you get what I mean. *smiles*

Great story!

Kritty

AWESOME. It's so sad, and totally how Dean would feel, and I love how protective Dean is over Sammy even at that age.

-Princess-

omg please update please please please please please

Please continue with this story...I just read it again...can't wait for another chapter

Ouch, that hurts...fantastically done.

that was amazing

whoa...Emma15 you have gift in writing, I love it simple but powerful Anyway this...oneshot..right? I really liked it, even though it was tragic and sad and it made me wanna cry (but didnt') Man keep em coming!

oh god, poor Dean.

these mean authoresses... they are always like that to our precious little deanesses...

you win

That was so sad and excellently written. Fantastic perspective and the sense of panic was as overwhelming as it would be for little Dean.

Fantastic work.

GN