OH OH! Dat was soo sad but still shoooo gud! Man, I'm jealous! U write gud stories gud poetry...not fair! Lolz...but srsly..really gud n touchin! A big hug 4 u..

I'm speechless. It was so beautiful and just wow. Amazing.

that was so beautiful! it made me cry. i never liked how she died on a bad note. *sigh, wipe a tear* oh, and i love hawk nelson, and tobymac too! i'm a big contemperary (did i spell that right?) christian artists fan, too! woo-hoo! okay, a little laughter comin' back in now! keep up the good writes! (can you even say that? did this make any sense at all? probably not, but that's okay. oh, well, *deeper sigh. then cheerfully:* have a nice day!

I almost started crying as I read this. This is so good. I cant belive they killed of Iola. Her and joe are my fav characters.

WHA I'm going to cry! Its beautiful, I love it, can I copy it and put it in my room? uh yeah I'm a some what of a poet, I had a poem published for a scholarship once, oh yeah you can get scholarships for poetry. Anyways its a great poem, I absolutely adore it, and I'm putting it in my favorites.

Hey!This rox!Yesness!Hope to hear more of your stories!

That was really touching. My daughter loves poetry and i sometimes read some of her stuff. I liked it alot.

Aw! how sweet! very nice!

very nice!