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Reviews For: No Longer So Young
JDanielle 2007-08-21 . chapter 1
I liked it
paulafromtwoson 2007-06-25 . chapter 3
Haha! Great ending.. What can I say? I'masucker for a happy ending ^_^ Great job on this!
paulafromtwoson 2007-01-26 . chapter 2
Great job on this~! I really can't wait to see what happens next! =)
JINX 2006-12-01 . chapter 2
wow that was great! one question that is totally trivial...why a 12 year old usualy your characters are like 14-18 ish? just wondering, but anyways great chappie update soon!
P.S. we got a lot of snow here too :)
JINX
LexAtello 2006-12-01 . chapter 2
your story isn't confusing.. but rather very intriguing.

the pattern, the girl.. keeping us wondering you are.

can't wait for more!
blueraven1999 2006-12-01 . chapter 2
Very good start to the story so far. Nornally, I would stop reading a story as soon as a original character appeared, but this story is too good to do so. It's the first angry Donatello story I have ever read. Please continue.
BubblyShell22 2006-12-01 . chapter 2
Great chapter. So, is Casey dead? I'm guessing he is. I'm also assuming Splinter's dead, which would cause Don to feel the way he does. Update soon. I can't wait to read more.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Mikey's Kunoichi 2006-12-01 . chapter 1
Very good. I definately think this is a good story, and I've only seen the intro.
Donny's Girl 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
YAY ANGRY DONNY


...i love angry donny...

i quite enjoy evil donatello


...

k done ^_^


anyway,this is fantabulous and i'll be keeping up with this ;)
jinx 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
ya know what, this just sounds really sad and kinda mean. don' cha fink! very dramatic, i like it but its a little upseting to read donny like that :( please continue...
JINX
engelina 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
you have me very curious to what happened. i hope you will tell us soon! sorry for being a little short, but leaving reviews is not my strongest point.

i hope you get the chance to update this soon!
FF Demon 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
You have my attention for this one. ;)
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Really good!
BubblyShell22 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Great job so far. I'm liking this a lot. Update soon. You are doing a good job on this. I want to see what happened to Don to make him feel this way.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
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