OMG! Is Anko gonna get raped?!

Anyway, I'm loving the story. Please update soon!

Okay, where do I start?

I forgot to mention this: Anko is about the same age as Kakashi, Kurenai, Asuma, and Gai. Meaning: 28.

Zaku, Dosu, and Kin are either dead at this point, or this takes place in some weird parellel dimension. Halfway through I forgot this took place during the chuunin exams.

Naruto fans generally don't like English translation techniques.

And lastly? It's a known fact Anko got her curse seal at a young age. There would have been no chance for Orochimaru to nab her at that point in time.

I'm sorry, I'm not following very well. Explain it to me, please. ^^;

Jason: Kisama... I'm going to kill Orochimaru... for what he did to Anko! (strikes a victory pose)

Samara: Fine, whatever Vanhell. Just don't let that freaky snake guy poison you.

Jason: Poison? (shudders)

Interesting. I wonder how Orochimaru got that building and all those people into the Forest of Death without Konoha noticing. I guess I'll have to wait to find out.

Overall, I'd say it was a good chapter. Though I have a hard time believing that Anko didn't know how to set the table. I think kunoichi have to be trained in that sort of thing for undercover work and whatnot.

0.o
Still well written, but strange.

Whoah... o.o

I like this take on the Chuunin exams...

It's interesting...to say the least :D

*hangs Orochimaru from the cieling*
now...PINATA TIME!
*pulls out a bat*

the story is nice. :]
hope you update soon.

Personally, I've never paid too much attention to a possible romance between the two prior to this fic. Then again, I do my best not to think about what that guy can do with his tongue. Ugh.

Overall, I'd say it was well written. It certainly does the job of making Orochimaru appear as a jerk.

It's interesting! Keep writing!

I can send you a link that might give you some more ideas. There is a filler episode that fills in some of Anko's past. (It's got a really weird team too, Ino, Shino, and Naruto XD)

Hey, pretty good! Keep it up Fishy! (a little out of character, but I don't blame you)

L-Fish. XD You strange girl you... ^^;;

I am fascinated with the Anko/Orochimaru pairing somewhat. It intrugued me for that one episode and since I'm passing by your account, I decided to read something and write you a review.

It was definitely short and straight to the point. This sounds like a really good rant. XD I love to rant too so I know how Anko feels. I must admit that Anko sounds a bit too much like Sheena in this one-shot. She is a daring person who likes to make a booming of an introduction and is very stern. A bit different yes?

Still, not bad for an introduction. It's going to be hard to pull off any kind of Naruto writing with tons of talented writers lying around this section for YEARS but I know you can do it. ^_^ Keep writing and keep trying. I want to see how you pull this one off. ^^;;

This is really good for an intro LFish ^__^
i can't wait for the rest
...*kills Orchimaru with a holy hand grenade* D=<
DIE EVIL SNAKE MAN!

nice! lol but my intro was probably that long...

Well, for a first naruto fic this isnt bad at all. If not a bit strange.