 Naruto98 2010-01-02 . chapter 1This story is by far my favorite of all. Such a good job, and such a good plot! You are an excellent writer, this is my favorite! |
 DannyelXYulu 2009-08-21 . chapter 22 I'M CRYING FOR GOD SAKE... SOMEBODY GIVE ME A TOWEL! IT'S STILL NOT ENOUGH! I NEED SOMETHING TO SPILL OUT IN. A BUCKET. A FLOOD! SOMETHING! IT'S WONDERFUL! I LOVED IT! I REALLY DID! |
 I-eat-Deidara-Rawr 2009-08-11 . chapter 22This was such an amazing story!!
You did an awesome job with the flow of the story and I loved how you set up the whole beginning of the story.
SasuSaku forever! |
 UchihaZeido5 2009-07-24 . chapter 22I love this story!I read it a long time ago,but I never added it to mu favorites(smooth move...-.-).I spent 30 min. looking for it on FF,then 10 minutes looking through the history in my computer(which is a lot!)until I finally found it! |
 CrAzYaNiMeFrEaKgUrL 2009-07-23 . chapter 22:D aw that was a REALY GOOD ENDING!~ lol poor hinata…and naruto just jumping and making out with hinata…hhahaha that was really funny!! and hiashi and neji…that's precious…and sasuke and sakura…being naughty eh?? hahahah :P XD story's end :D |
 LittleGreenWolf 2009-05-16 . chapter 22That was really great! I usually avoid baby-related Sasuke/Sakura stories, but yours sounded interesting enough and I'm glad I gave it a try because you pulled it off brillantly. The right amount of mystery and drama, and oh god did I love how you wrote Gai. |
 WorldUnseen 2009-04-26 . chapter 22Omg, I loved this. One of the best fan-fictions I've ever read, it was full of emotion at times. Sure there was grammar errors and things like that, but what the hell, everyone has those. What I loved the most was that you really didn't give away the plot and the whole story within the first few chapters. You kept me guessing from beginning to end on what would happen. I'm sure I'll end up reading this again sometime in the future, like I normally do with fanfic's that I like. I shocked myself by actually 'getting into' this story, I'm usually not really pleased with first person fanfic's, but this one shocked me. Your fanfic actually kept my interest from start to finish. |
 sasusakufan1314 2009-04-13 . chapter 22aw that was so sweet and AWESOME story it was long too which i like :D |
 sledgehammersutble 2009-01-20 . chapter 15 I'm enjoying the story, but
Sasuke just saying sorry after raping her?
and after Sakura knowing this, still calling him Sasuke-kun?
i find it abit ... irritating
then again, its your story and not mine |
 Conejo-sama 2008-12-26 . chapter 22OMG! That was the most dramatic and awesome story I've ever read! You got the in the story true and everything makes sense! I hope you make a sequel! I want to know what happens between the couples: NaruHina, SakuSasu, NejiTen. iT'S SO GOOD!
A/N: Plz read some of my stories too!
Like I said, great story! I just want to read it over and over again! |
 sonia 2008-12-23 . chapter 22 I really enjoy your story...
I had teary eyes when Sakura was trying to convince Sasuke to live and the confrontation about their relationship and I laughed so hard especially on the part where their daughter imitating the adult on bad words... The ending of the story is well written too!
I enjoyed it a lot (I read it in one sitting)...
Thank you for a good story. |
 QueenThayet12990 2008-12-14 . chapter 22I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! It was a great ending to a great fic! Ok, I liked a LOT of things this chapter, so this'll be kinda long. To cut down on it, one of my fave parts was everyone's reaction to Sakura and Sasuke getting married - it really reflected their priorities in life. Anyways, great fic!
1.“Perhaps by some Deus ex Machina—or a sick joke—Naruto ended up facing Pein. As you can imagine it was a very one-sided fight. But we all know what Pein and his group were seeking from Naruto anyways; the nine-tailed fox. So Pein did quite a number on Naruto and…voluntarily broke the seal. I suppose Pein thought extracting the fox would be like with Shukaku. Only…the nine-tailed fox didn’t want to budge, especially not to be some pawn. And so…it completely possessed Naruto."
(I just thought that was an AMAZING plot move!)
2.I had a sinking suspicion who was the culprit and his name began with ‘N’.
When I read that, my mind, for some reason, automatically went to Neji! Oops!
3.But then the Hokage hat was swept off his head and he punched the air with his free fist. “HEYA, **!”
I winced and pressed my hands over Tsubaki’s ears. |
 QueenThayet12990 2008-12-14 . chapter 21Oh my gosh-I just realized that Sasuke this chapter reminds me of my Dad! Awkward... Only one more chapter! No...
QuOtEs!
1.My anger quickly subsided. I could tell how much the situation was stressing her and she needed some annoying way to distract herself.
So I played into it. “Too bad for you, then.”
2.He didn’t disappoint. “Make sure your ** doesn’t get any fatter before we return.” Then he walked away.
“WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT MEAN?!?!” I roared, my yell echoing for miles. |
 QueenThayet12990 2008-12-14 . chapter 20Great Quotes!
1.“It was destroyed, wasn’t it?” I said miserably.
2.I really was insensitive. I knew those two had feelings for me, and that…it was a wonder they were still talking to me. I’d used them both and for what? I still loved Sasuke; that hadn’t changed all these years.
I felt so horrible.
3.I closed the door and locked it. I never opened the door again.
Comic Relief by Tsubaki that I thought was SUPER well placed!
1.Tsubaki was chewing on some shoji paper, not really paying attention to me.
2.Tsubaki let out a squawking laugh, her tiny hands clawing at Sasuke’s hair. Both of us jumped slightly at her outburst and stared at her. Sasuke seemed to be looking at her with some measure of relief. And I think…just for a moment I saw a ghost of a smile cross his face. |
 QueenThayet12990 2008-12-14 . chapter 19Dang it, Sasuke! You just HAD to go and be a drama queen about it! Grr... That's it! No more nice cheerleader QueenThayet12990! You aren't allowed to die and that's FINAL! |