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BlackWolfHowling
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseHere's a hint: post the rest of this.
KCS
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseHoly cow, how DARE you?
I mean, that was completely uncalled for!

So very, very sad! Well-written as always - but for heaven's sake, I don't like to bawl when reading fanfiction!

Yikes!
Pudupudu
2007-09-26
ch 1,
abuseOh no! This is so sad! :-( Poor Watson... the worst part is that he didn't know that he'd saved Holmes' life. And poor Holmes, to see his best friend's broken body- heart breaking. And how guilty he must feel! This is so angsty, even more so because it's so very atmospheric- I feel I'm there with them, sharing their pain. Brilliant work indeed
LA Suka
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abuseWhy was it total junk? This could make a cool scary story. If you ever consider trying to rewriting it, I'd read it. :)
StrangeBlaze
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseOkay I know it's been a while since you posted this, but I would LOVE to see the rest of the story! Two of my great literary loves--Holmes and Frankenstein, together. This is very descriptive and extremely sad. Well done :)
Kadal
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseYou should post the rest of this story! It looks really interesting!! A SH/Frankenstein crossover may seem stupid, but you seem to have written it very well!
jaws
2007-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou killed WATSON?!?!?!! Well, that was a little uncalled for . . . the story was well done (I can see where you would take to abandoning the first part . . . the idea is good, but getting it to work out well with two fandoms and all the what nots . . . I know I'd find it difficult) Like I said, the story is well written and the premise is good . . . but I always hate when we kill off main characters . . . but I guess it serves your purpose . . . keep up the good work . . . enjoy ; )
MoonlitPuddle
2007-02-06
ch 1,
abuseDon't stop,carry on...this was sad...why did Watson have to die so soon? Don't let Holmes stop in his quest for justice!!
A nine year old
2007-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abuse*sniff* I was hoping someone was a'gonna write this kind of story. THANK YOU FOR DOIN' SO!
lew daney
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely great. How many emotions in a sigle chapter story...
Please don't give up, Igiveup
MeGoobie
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseThis is where Madison begins to cry in front a computer screen and has her entire family stare at her in worried amazement. This was so sad! And so good! I am definately going to be reading more of your stories. Also, thank you for your reviews on "221." A lot. You make my day in more ways than one!
Merlyn
2007-01-08
ch 1,
abuseI'm sure whoever attacked them is going to be regretting that shortly. Very nice story, in character as well - Watson risking everything to save his friend, and then Holmes vowing revenge upon their attacker.
outlaw author
2006-12-21
ch 1,
abuseOh my God! What an amazing story! I was almost in tears by the end of it. AWESOME.
~outlaw author
Susicar
2006-12-04
ch 1,
abuseCongratulations, this is very sad, and very well done too. I hope don't be your last intent. Please continua. (poor Holmes)
Mysterylover17
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseVery poignant piece. I think you've captured Holmes' emotions beautifully. I daresay, I hope this is not your last piece. I do hope to see more from you, perhaps a longer piece. Great work, especially for a new writer. Brava!
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