Aw, man! All the ACTIONY stuff got cut out! I sure would've killed to see the second half (I'm a perv, yes. But then, aren't we all?)!

Still, nice work on the fic, buddy! I've seen your artwork on these two critters, Zorak and AvistA. In fact, this was so nice, it has inspired me to write a little something on my own. Fear not, it wouldn't be about a close encounter with that old sex-bug at a club. Not at all! I swear on...um...the top of Brak's head!

I liked it, even if it was just a personal story. The little details, such as the “bloonk” noise Zorak made when he winked, added a nice touch. I always enjoy reading fanfics where a character is taken out of their main setting and placed in a context that you don't get to see on the show.