it's got a weird twist,
it makes me like it.
I just watched this episode.
I actually want to read on!

well mj... this is my opinion... if you fail to continue it i will be forced to harm you severly (which i am at loathe to do) so please continue the story and there shall be many smores in your future... and yes there will also be ginger ale! =)

Of course you must continue :D 'cause this is something like a missing scene fic :evil:. It's excellevt! ;)

It's a good story, so far. The chapters are a little short though and aren't very in depth. But I'm sure you know what your doing since it's your story. Keep up the good work. :)

It is good!it could be way complicated and angsty!Peyton/Mac/Stella/Hawkes is a gr8 storyline.I'd love to read your interpretation of it(of course with a SMacked ending lol)pls make it in2 a longer fic!u knw u wnt 2 :) you cud carry on doing POVs or use that as a beginning for a longer fic.Either wud be gr8!!

Girl, who have to contiune it,loved it,

tf92 (devan)

ACK! NEED..MORE!

Luff it! Please continue!

~Jade

I can understand your angst. I was a little confused by the last scene with Stella and Sheldon, but I don't think the scene really meant there was something between them other than friendship. Maybe that is just the way I want to see it, but I don't think it was intended to convey a romantic interest between those two.

Anyway, enjoying your fic and hope you continue it. Would like to see where you take it.

what do ya mean you have no idea if your gonna continue... if you don't i will throw a tantrum lol jk =]... this is so emotional.. *sniff* lovely though xLila

aw, i feel ya... poor Mac, can i slap him and yell at him to kiss Stel?.. hmm maybe not lol :P loved it xxoLila ps. what is wrong with tbtb? seriously? arg... well *sympathy shipper hug*

i havent cn the epi yet, but i like your fic! update soon :D