Aw. So sad, but very kawaii indeed. I can see them two together. I liked the story. ^^ You've got a great writing style. Loved the little italicized interjections. Keep up the good work.
~Keeper
I _love_ you for plugging the roleplay. RLY. I was so totally out of inspiration today for writing but you...doing this...totally makes me want to finish my fanfiction now!