That was interesting. Can't say much else other then that.

typos!
"Ganon said as he waked up to the tall" Waked? I think you meant walk

"Your attack bLink through my disguise." Huh? That made no sense...

There was another typo somewhere but as I scan through looking for it I can't find it -_-

Anyway, the only other thing I can say is watch your thens, may places should have than instead of then. Also, you need to learn to use semi-colons... geezes so many places where you should have put them and you put a comma instead.

That is all.

AH! What kind of ending is that!? >> You mean mean mean person you!

Rah!

Ok, I'm done... onto the sequel.

Ack as if the voice in my head for Umbra wasn't bad enough.. .ack...
He. Needs. To. Die!

Nice chapter otherwise...

One typo...
"He was no longer and unknown force,"

interesting, very interesting...

Link glared at him. “I think I’d rather do it. Din knows what you’d do.”
Wait so Link can talk now?

omg i just read this thing from start to latest chapter in one sitting. All I have to say is update update update!

Umbra is a good evil villian. You love to hate him.
Good Luck Link! (...you'll need it)

I hate Umbra!! And I was totally off on my guess. Aw, taht depresses me now... how can Umbra just go and kiss Zelda like that? Especially since Link is most likely about to walk in on the two. Damn damn damn! Zelda better not go totally evil and want to kill Link... that wouldn't be very nice... Ugh, stupid Umbra, I hate him even more now! Link had better hurt him in the next chapter!

Alas! Dark Link Strikes again!

This fic is extremely good at invoking the imagination. I've read a lot of Zelda fanfics, but this one reaches to my top favorites. I love how you kept the continuity strong through out the story. The description of the battles mocks the same exact moves from various game play. The nostalgia of remembering past occurrences from those games but still re-envisioning it is amazing. It almost makes me want to animate it :D

Out of curiosity, the final strike against Amageten, it kinda reminded me of Link's special/final attack in Super Smash Bros. Brawl. Was it a source of inspiration?

Keep up the awesome writing, and I look forward to the conclusion.

~Kezi

I have no idea...Valdir?

That. Stupid. Cliffhanger. From. The. Preview! *glares angrily at the cliffhanger*

>> Anyway, nice chapter. I enjoyed it for the most part...

Any guesses...hmm...hnn...I don't know...hm...hn...maybe...nah...or maybe... doubt that...or possibly...couldn't be...or could it... Dark Link?

Ganondorf! It is so Ganondorf! That is why Umbra did not care for reviving Ganondorf, because he was already alive. Aw poor Zelda. And poor Link, he was there and he should have saved her. Aw well, he had better save her soon. I wonder if my guess is right... I cannot wait to find out!

Nice chapter. I liked it. I snickered at the mentioning of the Wind Waker.

Umbra is annoyingly unlikeable as always, but I sort of laughed at him when his master called him incompetent.

only noticed one typo...
"the mast began to become solid again" I think you meant mask not mast

Your story is still strong even after so many chapter is proof of the skills you have as a writer. I love reading your chapters because I know I will be reading something worth my time. I can not wait for the next chapter.

That chapter seemed shorter then past chapters... o_O Oh well it happens. Nice job on this. I look forward to reading more.

Oh and that ending is a major cliff-hanger, gr... you better update soon.

"Lin’s conversation was cut off by a sinister laugh." So when did someone named Lin appear in the story? I kid, I know you meant Link.