HEY STEVE... Nice to know that you have goodies still being posted up once in awhile. I just happened to sweep by this category and put in random characters for fics, and then I saw this... what a surprise eh?

Well alright, I'd say that this piece is nicely written and... I just like your use of emotions throughout the pice and was well composed, good work.

Now, let's have a little talk about UL shall we? How long as it been since you've updated? Do you have any idea how many times I came back into this category just to check up on the story? Hehe, anyway STEVE, I am glad to see that you are well, and I guess I shall take a read at the other collab fic later on. Until then, good luck!

Whoa, he lives! Good to see you back and writing, especially with something interesting like a KratosxColette fanfic. It's different, and I like different stuff. What was even better was that it was very well-written and plot-twisty, too. I was really surprised with Colette's reaction to the exsphere journey. I give Colette a high-five there for not clinging onto Lloyd. Does that mean he's going with Sheena on his journey now? XD Hehe, just kiddin'. This is getting pretty interesting, though, so I hope there'll be more soon. ^^

Pretty sweet ^_^! 'Tis a great setup for your upcoming collab, and I don't mind any pairing as long as there is some reason for it exisiting. I'll be on the look out for this story.

And, do you remember me XD? I must be dead in the TOS section, since I moved to the Zelda section, I really need to update my other stories too...

Aww, poor Colette. She's going to shatter and break Lloyd's heart with this one, and I have a feeling Lloyd won't quite understand why she is doing this. He might, deep down, but I don't think he'll grasp it at first. After all, he is Lloyd.

It looks like this is going to have alot of hardship for all sides. Lloyd is going to lose Colette, Colette is leaving behind her world, and I bet Kratos is going to get eaten alive by the fact that he's, atleast partially, responsible for this.

Oh well, I guess Lloyd has his friends to fall back on, which will probably do him alot of good...I hope.

I love the ending to this, with the reflections by Kratos and Colette. Gives us a sense of fullness to the entire prelude. Not only that, but the place you left us off at gives us something warm to smile about, something sad to contemplate, and all around closure that lets us know that, while the real story is about to unfold, this has a completion to it. I can't wait to see this story unfold, also considering the fact that you two writing a single story might just make my head explode.

Love it and I cannot wait to see this move further on. Peace!

-Insaneiac the Maniac

PS...What do we call it? Kralette? Coletos...and why does that second one sound like the name for a Cereal? O.o

Yay! You're not dead!^^
Lloyd: Okay folks, he's not dead. Let's bring the stuff back.
*People holding a headstone and a casket walk away*
(I'm just having fun. Did ya laugh? XD)
Nevertheless, I've only seen one other fic (to my knowledge at least) with this pairing. I've given it a shot before, so yes, I'll give it a shot again.
Good, interesting, I can't wait for the fic itself. And I can't wait for UL either.
Keep up the fantastic work!^_^

Hm, interesting, very interesting. Keep it up.

Hey, long time, no see! It's good to see that you've updated. And a crack pairing story, at that!

It's nice to see that you haven't lost your touch. Reminds me of a book I finished reading recently called "Kokoro." Not the plot, but the style you've used. I look forward to seeing more from you and your friend!

P.S. What happened to UL? Please don't stop at the climax...