Intriguing idea. Well written.

...omg...again, you stun me with your brilliance of plots. I love how you take such wonderful characters from a beloved anime of mine and turn them into somethign that they always could have become: either monsters, doomed souls, or people who want desire in the form of a sibling. I love your use of metaphor with Kohaku and the way you used beautiful wording. Again, so twisted and compelling. I love it!!

Oh wow. I didn't expect the ending, but I loved it. There was a darkness to it that was simply delightful. I wish there were more to read. Lol, great work.

Wow, this story was gloriously dark. I actually felt a chill run down my back when Sango heard the gunshot. Wow.

Really, well done. This was defiantly fun to read, a darkly twisted ending to the feudal fairy tale. Keep sending these babies our way, okay, Wheezambu?

Wonderful, wonderfully written.
You kept suspense througout.
I felt for Sango and Kohaku.
You left some things unexplained, to leave us readers wondering. Very few writers use that technique; only excellent writers do.
I saw a few minor grammar mistakes, but the writing style was superb.
Once agan, this was wonderfully written.

This is one of the best stories I have ever heard. So dark and original, love it.

Um...whoa. Well, that's different. Congratulations. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina

Brilliantly written. Any award you win, you truely deserve.

Ooh cold. But I knew that was the only way they could do it, so clean and simple without and messy strings. Contemplating the effects on the space time stream gets pretty interesting... but thats another thing all together, and not the point of the story.

Holy shit you killed Kagome.

and yet for the sake of this stories plot im okay with that.

it was so..forbidden yet so easily loveable, the whole dark and twisted is already known so ill just say that you madethis believable in its own AU universe, great job.

Tainted, twisted and incredible.

The hair stood up on the back of my neck each time I read this.

wow..that was interesting

Couldn't they just destroy the well first and then get the Shikon no Tama from Kagome? It would be much safer to just destroy the well because it did brought Kagome to the past, it's not just the Shikon no tama that alters time but the well too don't you think? Sango and Kohaku shouldn't worry about telling her when they can destroy the forces that can atler time and even stop Naraku from retrieving power.

from a thinking angel
angelamisaki
reading Dante's Divine Comedy

u kno wut this story is kinda nasty but then again it has a really good plot or so it seems.
so keep it up!
r4k