I assure you, the fanfic didn't suck at all. It was good! It was original--the theme of forming contracts and such. The way their relationship progressed and the reasoning were believable. Good job. I was surprised that you can manage to write a good and clear plot line for such a short story (only 5 chapters!).

I love you.

that is all XD

This story was great and I really enjoyed it!

WOW, cool story!

i really liked the story, and the only issue i had with it was that the ending could of been a little more drawn out, but even still ^^ it was such a good story and thanks for sharing it ^^

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Nicely done! I really enjoyed it XD

This was excellent! All you need to do is go into details about what Doumeki, ahem, Shizuka, intended to have kimihiro repay him with, or how kimihiro repaid him. That would be utterly delightful.

AWESOME!!
Omg I loved it xD
So cute and sweet ><
Great job!!

you know, this is my 2nd time reading this and it's still good. ^_^

That was good, I liked it^^

Aw, jeez. That story just ended too soon. I must admit, I wanted it to be more prolonged. I don't blame you for wanting Clamp to actually make that happen between Doumeki and Watanuki. I hope that you would add more to it in the future.

“There are ways you can repay me that don’t use your hands.”

XD

That quote will forever stay in my mind. 8D

Maybe I can even say it to creep my friends out?

Okay, save that thought.

XD That was awesome. I'm kin'a giddy right now because that was a great way to end the story but, alas, there is this sinking feeling that's screaming out "NO!! IT CAN'T BE OVER!!", right? So, great story. 8D I definitely want to read more from you, now. :3 Really made my day. Not even kidding, I had WAY too much fun squee-ing over this. XD

Ok, so I had read this story a while back and thought it was absolutely amazing(I didn't have an account then, so I couldn't give a review). Not only was your writing excellent, but your use of vocabulary was impressive. Really, great job! :)

WAI! Happiness overflowing. ^__^

Well, it didn't suck THAT bad. ... Okay, I'm totally just kidding. It was wonderfully written. Throughout the entire thing, there were only a few minor mess-ups, and only one shot me out from the story (Watanumki once said "was" to Doumeki instead of "wasn't"). But it was like finding gold in a shat pile, and I'm so excited to have found this I could scream. Thank you SO MUCH for writing this. ^_^ I'll treasure it always.

*hugs*

-Kayura

Bwahaha! Perfect! Suckers.

On to the last chapter!