That's a lazy, incomplete ending...

Welsh is not ANY form of Gaelic. It is a Brythonic language, different branch of the tree. Correctly, Scots Gaelic is just called Gaelic (pronounced gallic, not gaylic) and Irish Gaelic is just called Irish. But both are Gaelic tongues, as is Manx.

Credenza (piece of furniture), not cadenza (musical term).

Thou, not thee. "Thou wilt know!" "Thou dost stand", etc. "Thee" is the object. "I am with thee", "I give thee", etc.

And while I'm in correcting mode: "taut" (meaning tight), not "taunt" (meaning to mock). And you consistently spell the character's name "Matiland", when you seem to mean "Maitland."

I adored this story. And my sister did too! Haha, she absolutely loved it (stayed up all night to finish it).

Holy Oh MY GODDESS! That was AMAZING! You have no idea how ecstatic I was to find out I could read this on my kindle! This was by far my favorite thus far of your work, though I definitely think there should be a sequel to this. It was just OMG!

ohhh hahah "rape is not fun" horribly macabre line, but funny

please please PLEASE!

add more to this i loved the stroy but theres to much left to speculation. i feel you could add more to this story.

Is there more?

Even it it does end here, your story was amazing as always.

I really like your stories. This 3 parter was excellent. I was on the edge of my seat for a lot of it. I especially enjoyed the play between the two when Sarah was still taking classes. The secret within a secret reminded me of a small part of my life. I hope you continue to write wicked cool Labyrinth stories. I've favorited you.

Do you hear that? Do you? That would be my applause, Lady Sunshine. _ The third part was everything I was hoping for.

I was a super procrastinator on finishing it, only in part because I wanted to prolong it. Bet eh..least I got a chapter of my own finished.

I loved Oberon in this story. I can’t put my finger on why exactly but I was nearly grinning in every scene where he was present. The only one that might have topped him was William. I can’t believe I didn’t see that ending with him coming! His character was hilarious to me and knowing his relationship with Jareth just seemed to make it better for me. And when he said, "Well, I'll be buggered." While saving Toby….i don’t know why but I laughed for a good 5 minutes and I’m even kinda laughing now just thinking about it. His reactions are great.

I also just wanted to hug Colin for a few chapters. I was so happy he had a good ending.

I’m so happy with the ending. _ I think this one Is a toss up for my favorite next to Goblin Holiday.

Wonderful work!

LetoSai

i was wondering if i had missed something! lol i started reading your stories from from to back and came across the crystal nightmare and saw a garrett and im like i dont remember aeeing him falling her fookie in a previous story so i went a hunting! dallfabulous story a always but there r duplicate chapters other than that i commend you and your muse and now am ready for the nightmare ja ne!

this is awesome! brilliant work, i say.

- are you aware that a lot of these chapters have been posted twice? it's kinda annoying.

I love your stories, and I find great joy in them. But, with this story might I suggest you add more to it, or perhaps do another sequel. The ending does not feel like an ending to me. You left to many things up in the air. Miles escape, Sarah's pending marriage, Karen and Robert's acceptance or lack there of in entering into the underground. If you add in a major plot point it is best to wrap it up in a neat little bow by the end of the story. This is my experience as a writer. If you left things undone after adding something you will leave the readers feeling unsatisfied and disgruntled. Another small thing I am not sure if you are aware but there are many repeat chapters in this story, where you have a chapter and then it is posted again in the next chapter. Hopefully you don't take these words as being harsh or unkind. I really do love your stories and I think you capture Jereth very well. I just wanted to make a few suggestions. That is the whole point of the reviews.

Tons of love from the west coast

Lilli

This doesn't feel like its over...seems I may have seen a continuation listed in your works...gonna have to go check that out immediately.

Okay, I am with Sarah. This must feel a little weird to her. Loved the whole thing though!