This was a really good story and I usually don't read a lot of OC's, but this one I couldn't stop reading. I hope you do continue it soon.

when are you going to update this? *screams*

haha. i sound mad, but i'm not. i'm just impatient. which is bad. =]

Well you've left everyone in suspense! Please update this story!

You know, I just noticed now that I haven't been reviewing this story lately, like a loyal reviewer should, and I'm so sorry. I've been lazy lately for unknown reasons, but I'm reviewing now! I love how this is turning out. Thank God you updated this since the first chapter, I was going to go insane. But I love it and if you don't update this again soon, I'm going to be extremely angry. =]

“Standing out in the cool night air, leaning against a car that was more rust than metal and trying to avoid the fumes issuing from the various orifices of a drunk 16 year old were not what Tabby would have classified as ‘fun’”
^You know, when faced with a line like that, all you can do is ‘bwahaha’ muchly until the effects have worn off. Mine are still going. *glees*

Once again you grace us with another quality segment of the saga of Tabby (that just might be the lamest thing I've said all week), and once again I succeed in missing the beginning of it. But although it isn’t exactly short, I flew through this like a bullet through paper, not only because you’re not the only one who loves her, but because of how everything in the story is put together.

Seeing everything – most things at least – through her eyes and her mind is hardly an original idea, but each mood and thought fit so well with the the location/s and scenario/s, and her mindset itself, as well as the writing style that seems to become Tabby, that it near instantly grows on you and you become enraptured in this world, much like how your previous works behaved. However, unlike the previous ones, this story has near no magic or our favourite fairy pair in it whatsoever, giving teenagerdom, conflict (and resolution), relationships and most of all Tabby the spotlight, making the story just that much more delicious.

Normality among chaos and chaos among normality. I think that makes just enough sense to be a description.

Aw, man-I was practically there in that alley with poor Tabby. Thank God she fought that guy off as hard as she did!
And once again, I could smack the CRAP out of Derek!

Poor Tabby, her troubles NEVER end. I'm anxious for an update!

Once again, delightful interaction between Tabby and my beloved fairies. But I just wanted to SMACK Derek-what a jerk!

I'll be reviewing Chapter 2 a.s.i.a. :)

Right on, Tabby!! She certainly gave that mugger just what he deserved! If only ALL women could defend themselves like that!

I love the way she dealt with Derek, too. It was one of those "I don't need him, but I can't lie to save my life" moments. It played out perfectly for Tabby!

The C&W bits were nice touches in the story. Cosmo's slightly over-protective parenting style is the perfect match for Wanda's calmness. And nice save with the boxes!

Great chapter!! I'm really looking forward to the next one!

So I come home after school feeling really lousy (I hadn't really had a good day) and I think to myself, "Okay, going on to will make me feel better. Works every time." So I go on cartoons and click on Fairly Oddparents. And the first thing I see is a new story by qwerty kitties. And all I can do is shriek, "YAY YAY YAY!"

Seriously though, I was really excited, cause I don't think I've ever said this, but reading your stories always makes me feel better when I'm in a bad mood. And you haven't updated anything in a while, so seeing you had something new up made my day. And I read it, and guess what: it's awesome! I loved it for no particular reason except that it's really good. And I never used to be big on OCs until I first read about Tabby. I love her times infinity, whether she's 4 or 14. She's just an awesome character. It's so realistic too-this is very common to happen to a 14-year-old. I mean, I'm 14 and this has never happened to me, but I know it has happened to some. (And funny you should mention this as Tabby's "coming of age" since just recently in my social studies class we had to do this project where we had to make a mask, as in a mask for a coming of age ceremony. Coincidential? I think so.)

Yeah...for everything I wrote above this, I apoligize. Whoever knows me personally knows that when I start rambling I can't stop. I shouldn't make you suffer through it, but I just couldn't shut up.

Bottom line: this is just plain awesome. Please update this soon. PLEASE!!

Wow, what a great piece of writing! It probably deserves a better review than the ones I usually submit, but I'll give it a shot anyway.

I'm really feeling for Tabby right now. The pain that comes with being a tossed aside for the "first choice" can be so difficult on someone who's an introvert to begin with. I've definitely been in that situation before, so I can totally relate. It should be VERY interesting to see where Tabby ends up from here.

You've definitely grabbed my attention! I can't wait to read the next chapter!