Interesting they both had problems with turbolifts! Am enjoying your story--keep updating soon!

This is excellent1! One of the best Star Wars stories I've read.
Don't stop.

I was so glad to see this story again. I read it on another site, and I really hope you are able to finish it this time. You are a good writer. I like the changes so far in the story. Update again soon!

I really enjoyed this story. You are a great writer! I can't wait to see what'll happen next!

Beautiful story, I can tell you're 'more of a poet than a writer.' Not that that's anything bad about your writing, I mean it sounds like you like poetry. Anyway, keep it up.