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| XcuppycakeX15 2007-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseLOVE IT! |
| Adriana Feliciano 2007-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so cute! |
| Karlz4 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseXD I loved it! Faves! |
| fallingfarther 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh my god, that's too cute. |
| pyrokineticsiren-san 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseaw!! that was so adorable!! X3X3X3 lol! hm. would Gaara know what snow was... i never thought of that before... hm... tick, tick,tick... ah, that was a nice think! and of course Gaara wouldn't know what snow was, he lived in the dessert all his life! TA-DA! anyway, it was so cute! gave me that warm, fuzzy feeling! but i wanted to see Lee try to play with Gaara in the snow! i can see it now: Gaara all bundled up in a puffy suit and glaring at Lee like "You gotta be kidding me..." LMAO *Add author to my Author Alert list *Add author to my Favorite Authors list *Add story to my Favorite Stories list Sayonara! XDXPXDXPXDXPXDXPXDXPXDXPXDXPXDPXD |
| k-chan the dragongirl 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseYou're not by any chance from Washington, are you? The only reason I ask is that we just got a major snowfall here as well, which NEVER HAPPENS. Anyway, about your story. I think it's a wonderful concept, examining the wa Gaara would react to snow. Your developement of events is excellent. There is, however, no real conclusion. Even a short fic needs a sense of finality. Perhaps the plot simply needs more time to develope. That aside, the image of Gaara covered in snow was adorable. I would have liked to see more description of Lee in a winter setting, but I can see how that might not have fit. All in all, a decent one-shot. --K-chan |
| Gaara-kunshadowluvr 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseso fluffy, like snow.^^ |
| yami-sakura-tenshi 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was really cute. -- arii |
| Sora Inu-chan 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseLol, very nice. |