I really liked the way you characterized Rabastan; he sounds like he's an asexual, and it's rare to see those in stories. The fact that he says, no, he didn't like the kiss, is also very different from most fanfictions, which I like.

Oh, that was quite well written. I really like the way you wrote both characters. Poor Rabastan never has much screen time and I totally love his personality in this. You did a stellar job. Thanks so much for posting.

Oh, god - I love it. The way you've written Evan Rosier, is exactly how I role play him at a game on GreatestJournal. Right down to the fact when he gets something he likes, he won't let it go. (Though, in my Evan's case what he's not letting go of happens to be one very naive Regulus Black).

While it would've been nice to have a bit more description, it's good. :)

you really flesh them out well.